hi again completely awesome lj friends. thank u so much for the previous essay help. ^.^ i had this other idea for an essay and am really unsure about it.
hehe. thanks. i actually only wrote a little bit of the essay (like a couple paragraphs) bc i wanted to see what my mom thought before i continued. but this is kinda what i was thinking about it
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Haha I like the essay. It's funny and very you lol. Was that for any specific prompt, though? The one thing I would watch out for if you're using that for UF is that I don't believe the UF admissions people have much of a sense of humor. The lady who reads apps for Broward students came to my school to talk and she said funny essays are okay, but then someone asked her what some of the worst essays she ever read were and she started listing some topics that seems pretty funny/quirky/whatever that I thought would strike most admissions officers as being original and amusing, but she said that she found them highly offensive....although I think for just about any other school (since I believe that most schools do have a sense of humor), this essay would be amazing :)
hehe thanks. actually, although i got 3 ppl supporting me, i got 2 against. and even with these numbers, the second person opposed weighs more heavily than the other 3 supporters combined - my mom and the person who is paying for the app. so i changed it pretty much. she liked it, but thought i could (and would evidently) write more about myself and everything. so i did it like 2 hours before deadline. haha yay for procrastination!
btw, if u want to see the one i submitted, give me the word. yea "the word." haha
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Not everyone could pull off something like that. You get a GJ!
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Also, where is this essay on porn? ^_^
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btw, if u want to see the one i submitted, give me the word. yea "the word." haha
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But yay for being done with apps :D
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