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[ PLAYER INFORMATION ]

Player Name: Min
Age: 16
Timezone: EST
Personal Journal: min19
Contact Information:
Instant Messenger: nineteenthminute (AIM)
Email: min19@live.com

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UNDER CONSTRUCTION!

( AKA stuff that you never wanted to know anyways! )

Marking the end of my run at EW! If anyone still has this journal on their FL, remove it now.

[Guess who else got killed during the event? A hallway camera on the ninth floor is showing feed of Romano's body slumped against the wall, for those of you who happen to catch it. No blood or anything, though his chest is flickering in a very strange fashion, similar to a TV channel with bad reception.]

[Then the flickering slows, then finally ( Read more... )

[This guy actually had a pistol on him since he landed himself in this place. Now it's out and loaded. Add a paranoid trigger-happy Italian... PROFIT!]

Why [BLAM!] can't [BLAM!] I [BLAM!] fucking [BLAM!] get out...!!!

[Cue more reckless gunshots at the barrier and some of the surrounding walls. Meanwhile, Romano looks very frazzled. He already ( Read more... )

[There's a crash, a loud yell spattered with curses, the sound of objects falling, and then... silence. That can't be a good sign ( Read more... )