for Dira: "Trajectory" (Men With Brooms) by sprat

Aug 16, 2005 16:50

Title: Trajectory
Author: sprat
Recipient: dsudis
Fandom: Men With Brooms

Beta thanks go to gurrier for her many excellent suggestions and for being incredibly patient with me throughout the process of writing this story.

Trajectory )

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pearl_o August 22 2005, 23:45:29 UTC
Oh, I liked this a lot.

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sprat September 1 2005, 14:33:51 UTC
Thank you! :)

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dsudis August 23 2005, 01:31:03 UTC
Oh, yay, this is wonderful! I love this backstory for Lennox--the stable home, the good boy, the implication of everything going astray somewhere down the road, until he's the skeevy drug dealer himself. And I love his relationship with Cutter--they're such boys! Perfect! Thank you so much!

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sprat September 1 2005, 14:37:52 UTC
Oh yay! Thank you! It wasn't the story I'd intended to write at all--I was trying to write something that actually met your request, honest! But then I got carried away. I'm so glad you liked it anyway. :)

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lynnmonster August 23 2005, 02:29:10 UTC
Nice backstory -- I really liked it!

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sprat September 1 2005, 14:38:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you did. :)

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lipsum August 23 2005, 06:19:33 UTC
eee! They are so young and woobie!

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sprat September 1 2005, 14:38:44 UTC
Hee! Thanks. :)

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akite August 23 2005, 17:54:43 UTC
Excellent. They're both too young at this point to get out of Long Bay. It's really rather bittersweet when you know that they eventually do.

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sprat September 1 2005, 14:41:18 UTC
Thanks so much! And yeah, I think it's probably a good thing they got caught. :)

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