Comments | midsummer_fic: For aerye: "The Evening and the Morning" (Wilby Wonderful) by Dira

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For aerye: "The Evening and the Morning" (Wilby Wonderful) by Dira

Aug 16, 2005 10:20

Title: The Evening and the Morning
Author: dsudis
Fandom: Wilby Wonderful
Recipient: aerye
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The second day.

( The Evening and the Morning )

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dsudis September 1 2005, 19:50:22 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

kassrachel August 22 2005, 23:16:15 UTC

Oh, this is totally wonderful. The bit about standing upwind (first literally, and then metaphorically) -- and that last line. ::happy sigh::

Yay.

dsudis September 1 2005, 20:01:10 UTC

Thank you! I am dorkily fond of the standing-upwind part myself. :)

pearl_o August 22 2005, 23:59:09 UTC

I loved this.

dsudis September 1 2005, 20:01:35 UTC

Yay! Thanks!

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dsudis September 1 2005, 20:02:38 UTC

You're very welcome! I'm so glad you liked it!

lyra_sena August 23 2005, 02:02:44 UTC

Oh I really love this. This line:

Duck, Dan thought, not for the first time, would have made a great cowboy if he'd only been born in the right century--not the movie-star kind, tipping his hat and kissing the cowgirls, but the real kind, with callused hands and a tanned face, who didn't say much because cattle don't give a man much practice in conversation.

is fantastic.

dsudis September 1 2005, 20:03:21 UTC

Thank you! I was really excited when I worked out the various cowboy analogies. :)