untitled-chapter2

[miekissluv]

Title:  Untitled
Pairings: Yukido/Haiki
Disclaimer: I don’t own neither of them …this is a fiction only.
Genre: Drama/AU (multichapter)
Summary:  Yukihiro struggles in accepting himself as he struggles to fight his loneliness.
Chapter 1: ~ Silence…. That smaller guy eyes widen in surprise that he slowly letting yukihiro’s hand go. Yukihiro, who have

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[kamui_kinomoto]

Eeeeeh!!!! The first part is really... hmmmm... sad but heart-warming, I can't explain my feelings~~ (>w<) And aaaah, so Yukkie is really mute, whyyyyy~~ *sniffs* My heart hurts for him~~ 。゜(゜´Д｀゜)゜。 But I'm so happy because Hyde is really sincere in making friends with him~~ (*w*) So sweet~~ Plus the fact that they can communicate well, I'm glad for Yukkie, plus he is smiling!!!! ♥

Aaaah~ I sense that it's the start of a veeeery beautiful and touching friendship! <3 Can't wait for the next chapter! =^w^=

BTW, if you'd like, I can maybe proofread/edit/point out some grammar mistakes for you (I'm not sure though if which is better, after you post or before you post~ ^^;). Well, English is not my mother tongue and I think my English is still so-so (sometimes I'm not sure if it's correct or not XDDD), but maybe I can help with the basic/simple errors. *nods* Though I'm not sure if how long it will take for me to do that. (^^;;;;)

[miekissluv]

thank you for reading...

well yukkie is mute in this story(you must have really hate me right now...gomen~) but don't worry! our hyde is going to save the day \(>o<)/*yay*

Aaaah~ I sense that it's the start of a veeeery beautiful and touching friendship!
oh no...you can actually predict the story *worry*... my story wouldn't going to be a surprise anymore *panic*... got to find a way to twist the story~

BTW, if you'd like, I can maybe proofread/edit/point out some grammar mistakes for you
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!that's really very kind of you...I'm really glad that you willing to help me...since I still new in writing(especially in English since its wasn't my mother tongue either)...about when you going to do it is all up to you, I'm happy enough to know that you like to help me...I'm looking forward to learn from you<3

[kamui_kinomoto]

*sniffs* No, I don't hate you at all~~ *laughs* But I wonder if he will be cured one day or something like that~~? But oh well, as long as dear hyde is there to support and love him, I guess it doesn't matter that much~ (*___*)

oh no...you can actually predict the story *worry*...
Eeeeeh!!! Noooo~~ (*A*) Maybe I feel this way because I read too much shounen-ai mangas?? XDDDD But really, I'm interested to read how their beautiful friendship will unfold~! (*w*)

And yeeey, no problem about that~! ♥ I started writing fanfics seven years ago, and whenever I reread them, the mistakes I made were really noticeable to me now~ (^_~) So I tried rewriting/editing some of the chapters. And I guess it'd be nice if I can practice my non-existent "editing skills" to someone else's story~ In this case, both of us can practice! \^o^/ (I have Journalism degree but cannot really use what I learned back in college in my current job~ XDDD

[miekissluv]

*laugh* glad that you not hating me~ well to know that you just have wait for the story to progress...hope you're willing to wait since its going to be quite long

I'm interested to read how their beautiful friendship will unfold~! (*w*)
I'm glad to hear that(^_^)~

I'm sure that I'll be learning a lot from you since you're a sempai and you having a degree in related field is definitely an advantage... I'm studying nursing right now so writing is not in my field and I don't use English in my daily life, but I really love writing and it help me practice my English (though I'm still not confident in using English in my conversation, but it still help me in not forgetting how to use English at least T_T")

(my weekend is every Monday and Tuesday~ ^^;
*laugh* you're weekend is definitely different than others... its ok, I'll be waiting for your PM than<3

[kamui_kinomoto]

Yes, of course I'm willing to wait~! (*w*) But I might poke you every now and then asking, "where's the next chapter, I can't wait anymore~~ ;w;" *laughs* XD;

Eeeh~ Not a sempai at all! (^///^) XDDD Ah~ So you study Nursing, wow~ Nursing is a famous degree here in my country~ ^^; But yes! Writing fanfiction is a good way to practice English! *nods* And also posting and commenting here in LJ, ne? ^w^

Yes, my weekend usually changes depending on my bosses, but never to the normal Saturday & Sunday weekend~! XDDD I still can't formulate my message (I'm currently confused about some things in real life XD) so I'll just send you a PM once my head is clear, so I won't forget anything (or say something weird)~ (^_~) ♥