Comments | mikiya2200: Clowns to the left of me

mikiya2200

Clowns to the left of me

Jan 23, 2011 02:18

“Sam?”

He shifts.

“Sammy?”

It’s cold.

“How are you holding up?”

He turns his head, frowns.

Holding up?

“Sam.”

Something touches his shoulder and he shifts his weight to the side, turning his face in the direction of the voice. His eyes are closed and it’s dark.

When did he close his eyes?

“Sam.”

The voice belongs to his father, it’s closer now ( Read more... )

spn sam, fanfiction, spn john, supernatural, h/c, one-shots

Comments 36

1_rhiannon_1 January 23 2011, 01:49:47 UTC

I like this a lot!

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 12:49:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I just love your pic, btw, made me grin! :D

1_rhiannon_1 January 24 2011, 13:20:57 UTC

Aww, thanks <3 I'm such a Sammy!girl :o) I snagged it from raloria :o)

embroiderama January 23 2011, 03:23:15 UTC

Oh wow, this is so tense and awesome. Sam and John both feel just right.

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 12:48:57 UTC

Thank you SO MUCH, it really means a lot to me to hear they feel right!

lalablue January 23 2011, 03:35:08 UTC

Very nice. I like worried/concerned John.

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 12:45:44 UTC

Thank you so much, concerned John is actually one of my favorites, too!

harrigan January 23 2011, 03:53:46 UTC

Leg trauma fics are my weakness *g*!! I'll be coming back to savor this one again from time to time!

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 12:45:04 UTC

Really? Beat-up-guys would be my favorite, you know, I love barfights-h/c, roughed-up-boys... totally MY weakness... ;) You can come back any time you want! :) Thank you so much!

dontknowmyname January 23 2011, 04:11:10 UTC

This was seriously the best thing I've read in what feels like ages! It reminded me why I love hurt!Sam so much. So few people write this side of a John and I just love reading it so that plus hurt!Sam made this story absolutely amazing in my opinion! Thank you so much for writing this. I also LOVE the song you chose lol. I could probably go on with the compliments and such but I'll stop before I get out of control =).

EDIT: I JUST SAW YOUR HEADER! (don't ask me how I missed it lol) I vote you continue writing Sam and John moments because there just aren't enough and I so crave them. Plus you're obviously amazing at it. Sorry! I'm really done now.

4thejourney January 23 2011, 05:57:41 UTC

I agree with the above comment so much! You write John and Sam SO well in all your stories- I just really love the dynamics you create between the two. :-) Loved this fic. :-)

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 19:10:01 UTC

Aaaw, thank you! I really didn't think people would be that interested in the dynamics between them since it's not Dean Sam is interacting with. I'm SO happy you like how I write them, really, means a lot to me! Thank you so much! :)

mikiya2200 January 23 2011, 12:55:22 UTC

Wow. Thank you SO much, you really made my day with this! :) I totally agree that there are not enough stories out there with John acting like a human being, let alone like a father who loves his son(s). I love writing that side of him so I think there'll be more of them in the future!

Thank you so much for your kind words, they totally made me feel all fuzzy and happy! :)