Pet peeve #947

[milady1844]

Belabouring the obvious.

If you say that your character, "glared with his eyes and then laughed with his mouth," I'm going to run away using my feet and delete your story with my fingers.

Comments

[improperlydone]

*dies*

That was so damn hilarious. I'm over here cracking up! Thanks for your wonderful (and well-warranted) bitchiness. :)

[xoverau]

You know, that's almost stupid enough to be poetic. :)