You're definitely taking your own advice in this poem. The feeling I get from this is that it's describing a really beautiful moment or time but its so dark and there's something missing, something isn't quite right. It's got a really subtle tragedy about it. Needless to say I read it a few times and really enjoyed you sharing it.
i'm glad you liked it. for some reason, this poem meant a lot to me. i don't think i have worked on a poem recently as hard as this one. i desperately love this piece; i'm glad others think it's good as well.
this was beautiful. i think you captured such a strong feeling... i don't know, i can't explain it really, but i just know the feeling you are conveying and you do such a good job of capturing it. the last stanza is dead on...i love it, especially the last few lines.
i love seeing what you did with it! keep them coming! :D
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i love seeing what you did with it! keep them coming! :D
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