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mimblexwimble

on another's sorrow [spn][one-shot]

May 30, 2012 00:06

Title: on another's sorrow
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: John, Dean, Sam
Word Count: 2,800
Rating: PG
Summary: It's been eight months, but John's back.
Notes: Third in the Innocence 'verse (de-aged Dean). Title from William Blake. Even though this has nothing to do with the poem. At all.

( on another's sorrow )

one-shot, #621, innocence 'verse, supernatural: fanfiction

Comments 51

gypsy_atavari May 31 2012, 02:16:59 UTC

I just finished reading all three and *sniffles*

John you have some making up to do!!!

mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:15:24 UTC

He really, really does. Thank you for reading!

werewolfsfan May 31 2012, 03:44:42 UTC

There is no way for me to convey my joy at finding another story in this verse. Especially since it tore my heart out and stomped on it! But thank you, I truly did want more and I appreciate this.

mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:15:53 UTC

I'm so glad! I hope the next couple of installments will be out sooner rather than later. Thanks for sticking with this 'verse!

jespretender May 31 2012, 09:08:50 UTC

Oh God this is so sad! You must fix it and make it better. I love the dialogue between the boys! Fantastic gut wrenching verse.

mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:16:01 UTC

Thank you!

embroiderama May 31 2012, 17:05:43 UTC

OMG *heartclench* John needs to get it together and stay. I love John's POV here, and GAH, poor Sam.

mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:16:53 UTC

Poor John. He loves his sons, but he's so messed up, and it affects everything he does. Thank you for reading!

sylvia_locust June 2 2012, 18:11:27 UTC

Hmm...three stories and three POVs. I hope that doesn't mean you're finished with this series. It's lovely and so interesting to see the dynamics shift this way. I really love your Sam in these stories; often he's written as such a "taker" and I firmly believe he would do the things for Dean that Dean did for him growing up, if things were different...you've created an interesting way to explore that.

mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:18:30 UTC

Oh, not at all. The next installment will be from Sam's POV, and then the one after from Dean's. I just like to switch it up so that I don't get stuck in a rut. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And I am firmly against Sam as being only a taker - I think he gives back as much as he takes, just like Dean does. Thank you for reading!