Comments | mina_pak: fic: quiet

mina_pak

fic: quiet

Jul 20, 2006 01:27

title: quiet
pairing: marat/tomas
rating: pg
words: 597
summary: at the master series paris, 2005.
notes: for di. :) only for you would i write tennis fic again. :D anyways, it was written in less than an hour after i found a sentence that i wrote months ago in my writing journal and was inspired. i hope you like it. i may edit and try to fix it up ( Read more... )

fic, tennis, marat/tomas

Comments 5

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mina_pak July 20 2006, 07:47:05 UTC

thank you. :) i love details. it's rather funny because people always point that out in my writing but i never really think about it while i'm writing. i'm glad that they aren't too excessive though.

making up subtitles is really a fun thing to do! :) it's also rather funny during soccer matches as well. i would sometimes watch on the spanish channels during the wc because the espn commentators sucked so much. anyways, thanks again. :D i'm really glad you like my little quick fic.

quinoline July 20 2006, 11:54:30 UTC

THIS IS AWESOME. I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU. You writing tennis fic again just for me-- you're just too sweet. <333

You've captured them both perfectly, which I think must be pretty hard since nobody knows Tomas much. But your Tomas is exactly how I see him. :) The bit when Marat tells him to raise the trophy, and Tomas smiles, that was so beautiful. And the second last paragraph! I had to shove my fingers into my mouth and bite them to keep from squealing out loud.

&hearts

mina_pak July 20 2006, 20:10:12 UTC

i'm glad you like it. :) i was rather iffy because well, it's my first tennis fic in a long time. i'm happy you feel the characterization is correct. i wasn't too sure about marat. that's exactly how i picture tomas as well though. :) aw, squealing from happiness is good. :D anyways, thank you.

scoobydumblonde July 21 2006, 19:52:01 UTC

Ah! I've missed tennis fic from you. *snuggles you*

That said, I usually don't read second person pov stories. They're too abstract most of the time and hard to follow unless written well. This was beautifully written and amazingly detailed. I love the connection between Tomas & Marat and how just them sitting together and holding hands can be oddly erotic.

Really lovely writing. :-)

clair3 August 13 2006, 12:17:08 UTC

I'm begninning to like this pairing because of DI XD, and i think your fics are one of the best out there!