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With hands behind his back 2/2

Oct 27, 2010 21:23

Title: With hands behind his back 2/2
(I totally made this one up just now, for the working title read A/N below)
Author: mindor
Disclaimer: If they were mine, I wouldn't suffer through the pain that is writing about them.
Pairing: Pinto
Word: ~3030
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, BDSM (leaning toward D/S rather than S/M...for now, they never behave the way I ( Read more... )

fic, pinto

Comments 18

amerasu1013 October 27 2010, 19:47:26 UTC

HNNNGH bb you're awesome!!!

mindor October 30 2010, 11:21:54 UTC

I forgot to reply on these comments, I fail at life obviously...

Thank you bb! (As Garden said, it's always nice to be reminded xD)

amerasu1013 October 30 2010, 14:07:34 UTC

I... I t-thought you didn't like m-me anym-more!!! Waaaa! *sob*
LOL no it's okay, I forget it too sometimes, and *hugs* for this awesome story and the author's note and everything!!!
<3<3<3

angelrox040 October 28 2010, 00:09:49 UTC

*drools* Thank goodness I am already in bed.

This was absolutely fabulous! Will there be any more?

Also I was very disappointed Zach couldn't choke on it...and that made me doubletake and go: wha? XD

mindor October 30 2010, 11:26:58 UTC

There probably will be, since I already have about the tenth of a conversation written, which I couldn't fit in this one, cause the boys weren't going that way. :(

Also I was very disappointed Zach couldn't choke on it...and that made me doubletake and go: wha? XD
Imagine my shock when I started typing it, seriously, WTF? :D

zjofierose October 28 2010, 06:51:27 UTC

wow, mindor! that was really something!
gosh, i sure hope you're going to follow this up with a sequel... *hint hint hint*

mindor October 30 2010, 11:27:44 UTC

*takes hint gingerly* I'll do my best, thanks bb! :)

garfieldspet October 28 2010, 17:16:55 UTC

This was so COOL!! Moar please...pretty please?

mindor October 30 2010, 11:28:56 UTC

Thanks, I try. *g*

medea_fic October 29 2010, 02:47:12 UTC

Oof. The idea of a Zach who is so well trained that he holds his positions without ropes is, well. Ngghhh.

And oh, Chris. He totally *has* bitten off more than he realised, hasn't he? But oh so determined to chew! I love it! I do like how Zach is admitting to things, though, too, like this bit -

At the peak of my training I could be, as you’ve put it, talked into an orgasm in minutes without any further stimulation. But that takes a lot of time, to develop certain responses to certain tones of the voice or words, or whatthefuckever. Can we stop talking about this now, please?

Well, honey, if you didn't want to admit that, you shouldn't have tested Chris in the first place! >:D

mindor October 30 2010, 11:47:00 UTC

*flails* Okay, fangirling is over for now. :)

Zach just didn't want to turn out to be the kind of sub you can ignore and do whatever you want, completely disregarding him. He's a fighter, a bit bitchy, very proud and confident but he does make a beautiful sub once you learn to handle him...Yeah, I've possibly given this a bit too much thought lol.
(I don't even know where the idea of experienced, but reluctant Zach came from, do you? :P)

The idea of verbal orgasms is very...fascinating. Once I've read/heard that it's quite difficult to achieve but it's possible, I was all 'Chris could totally talk Zach into a tantric orgasm by reciting dirty poetry. Like Villon, that'd be awesome.'