Comments | mindor: The bet

mindor

The bet

Nov 13, 2010 22:16

( Part 2 )

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mindor November 15 2010, 06:49:56 UTC

Thank you!

darlapr0duction November 14 2010, 04:03:49 UTC

I feel kinda bad reading this on a Sunday afternoon :8 So HAWT!!!! Feel like I need a cold shower. Love bottom Zach. love this Story.

mindor November 15 2010, 06:52:47 UTC

I have yet to write a fic with Chris bottoming, but I think I like bottom Zach as well. Thanks for reading!

aliassmith November 14 2010, 07:49:42 UTC

Hnnngh...

That was amazing. You are amazing.

I'm reccing this fic SO HARD to EVERYONE right the fuck now.

mindor November 15 2010, 07:00:14 UTC

You're amazing! (I may have a bunch of your fics in my memories for when I need my brain melted...) So I'll just hold my inner fangirl back and politely thank you for reading!

aliassmith November 15 2010, 07:43:43 UTC

Now I'm just blushing *_*

and I kinda wanna punch you in the shoulder and go "No, YOU'RE amazing!" but we could end up doing this all day, so I'll try to keep my fangirling on the chain, too. For now :D

leandralocke November 14 2010, 17:52:33 UTC

Well, as I've already told you while beta reading I really, really enjoyed this fic. It had a great mixture of wit, sarcasm, hotness and even fluff.
Can't really add much more than what I've already said and what others here commented (could second everything Amerasu said *g*), so... Well done.

It was a pleasure to beta read this (though it's highly possible I overlooked the one or other error, since neither of us are native speakers but ah well *g*).

mindor November 15 2010, 07:06:20 UTC

As I've already said it was my pleasure to have you work your magic on this fic. (even if you gave my commas a complex :D)
So thank you for your hard work and The Voyages of Peen Pine Wood!

therumjournals November 14 2010, 21:59:13 UTC

this was awesome, oh man, so many perfect one-liners

he’s gay as a handbag full of rainbows. - i may have to use that one...

channeling Sylar at his most intimidating - oh yeah. that would work on anyone.

Because I don’t look like a straight boy begging to be pounded into submission. - unf. also - accurate description of chris.

there’s no way Chris’ bi-curious side would stay in its walk-in closet upon seeing Zach enjoy a stripper to the fullest.

and of course the last line was perfect, timely, hilarious, and true :-D

mindor November 15 2010, 07:13:51 UTC

I may or may not have made a *therumjournals commented on my fic* banner and put it above my bed, so I can bask in the glory all night...Thank you!