The bet

Nov 13, 2010 22:16



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lindarella123 November 15 2010, 05:27:13 UTC
WOW THAT WAS HOT! Loved so much about this. The last line slayed me. They even banter when they fight. This one goes in the memories section. Loved it. :D

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mindor November 15 2010, 07:20:44 UTC
Thank you, smart guys fighting/bantering is hot, can't imagine a better foreplay. :)

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medea_fic November 15 2010, 07:39:25 UTC
Oh my God. Excuse me a moment while I go take a cold shower.

This was just - so, soooo good. So hot. I love how Chris changes from so in-control to er, actually, this is all new stuff. LOVE. Hot as hell!!

And holy fuck, gepic last line - excellent bb!

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mindor November 15 2010, 10:35:27 UTC
Well Chris does seem like an overeager puppy to me, who's very keen on biting off more than he can chew, lucky Zach's being patient with him and helps him along the way!
Thanks for reading!

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saavik1979 November 15 2010, 17:39:33 UTC
I laughed, I squee'd, I loved it. Great job! I can't put it any better than the others have, I just wanted you to know I think you're awesome and I LUV'D your story!

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mindor November 16 2010, 06:53:10 UTC
Thank you! *basks in the LUV*

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garden_hoe21 November 15 2010, 19:26:11 UTC
I'm just about ready to leave a marriage proposal. DAYUM, girl! I didn't know you had all of that!

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mindor November 16 2010, 06:56:36 UTC
Oh, I..ehm, well don't even know what to...say. One they you'll make an honest Anton fangirl out of me. :D

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nudeonthemoon November 15 2010, 22:21:16 UTC
AHHHH so much hotness, I loved it. I imagined the hot dude from the beginning as George Clooney and it was also ridic hot. GAH, love it.

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mindor November 16 2010, 06:58:58 UTC
Zach's effortless confidence is really hot (at least for me) and you're right, Clooney's the perfect man to challenge it to make it even hotter!Thanks for reading!

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