The bet

[mindor]

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[lil_insanity]

“Reading Freedom and waiting for you to fuck me, like the rest of the world.”

...I love you.

But seriously, this was really great. It was well-balanced and included a little something for everyone. Oh, and most of all, HOT. I usually prefer top!Zach but this was pretty epic. I loved how rough and frantic it was.

[mindor]

You just made me realize that I have yet to write top!Zach...And I'm glad you enjoyed something that's usually not your thing, thank you for reading!

[inboots]

I really, really, really enjoyed your Chris! Like, really. (Let's have one more really for good measure.) He's boy-ish and charming at times, but also assertive and forceful and I loved that he got the upper-hand with Zach in their "who will top" fight. I feel like this is a rarity in Pinto fic, lolz.

The door scene was particularly hot, btw.

[mindor]

Chris tries to look menacing, but he comes off mostly as whiny and a bit standoffish. "I'm not the twinky bottom you think I am. I want to top!" He pouts for good measure, but Zach doesn't seem to be impressed.
"Stop operating under the delusion that you topping will make you any less the girl in this relationship. Also you aren't exactly ingratiating yourself to me by insulting the vast majority of gay men who are confident enough in their masculinity to find satisfaction in bottoming. Like me." Zach shrugs reaching for the lube.
"An 'okay' would have done the trick, you know..."

Sorry, I couldn't resist, thank you for reading! :)

[zjofierose]

whoof, mindor, damn! that was incredibly hot! i was excited about this when you told me, and it more than lived up to the hype!

well done, bb!

[kianspo]

Loved the premise and the execution. So damn hot! :D

It somehow figures Zach's bitchy, no matter the position. ;)

[inu_spockya]

ho-lee crap!! Mmmm, om nom nom... damn this was hot!!