Hey guys. ♥ I finally decided to put up a critique post because I really want some constructive criticism from those who are even vaguely familiar with Integra's canon. I want to play her as in-character as possible, so~

I will consider every piece of criticism I'm given, no matter how harsh. It is all appreciated...unless it's outright flaming. ( Read more... )

[Very quiet shuffling of cloth indicating movement.]

...Hm. Much has happened during my recovery. I shall find out details in due time.

[There's a few-second pause in which she moves to turn off the communicator, but then...]

Moa? You...who is this?

[Click.]

I...absolutely hate...being sick. Not like I haven't been sick before...but...this time around I can't handle it.

-- ...what? Of course I ca --

Can't.

[[ooc: very halfassy weird truths. she's sick and talking funny 8D;]]

He was there...one. second. ago. And now he's gone.

No. No no no no no this is not because I'm sick, he's GONE.

[[ooc: teg's sickness has gotten worse and she's been seeing/hearing things >_> and...edgey just poofed. so.]]

Edgeworth. Moa. Either of you, both of you, it does not matter. I...am not feeling too well -- it is becoming increasingly difficult for me to walk. Do you think you co

[[ooc: ...so Integra passed out after taking a cold shower in the high school locker rooms. Vitamin B12 deficiency GET. xP]]

I will be working on a new introduction to link to new arrivals to Discedo. If anyone would like to contribute in any way, feel free.

...Nnh. My muscles are ridiculously sore and it has been hard to stay awake as of late. It is quite odd and irritating, but I am sure it will pass.

Twenty-four hours in a day...

Twenty-four.

I feel no different than yesterday. I do not know why I expected anything more.

[The faint sound of wind blowing against the communicator. She's outside, somewhere fairly high up, and she's there for a reason. There's a faint rustle of cloth as she bends down to pick something up, and then straightens again. Edgeworth. It's Edgeworth's body that she has just retrieved.]

"...Was he afraid, or tranquil?
Might he know
How ( Read more... )

This is better than a walkie-talkie! I can type on it, too ( Read more... )

[Very faint static, and them fumbling. Right now, she's trying to refigure out her communicator.]

Is...is this like a walkie-talkie? Can I talk into it? There are people here, I can read and hear things they say on this...

Can somebody please tell me where I am?

[[ooc: Explanation go~ Integra recently got badtouch'd by Kirie and though the commentlog ( Read more... )