On dresses and unspoken rules

[minhosflower]

Pairing: Onho (Onew/Minjung)
Rating: NC-17

Comments

[minhosflower]

the beginning was pretty "BOOM" i guess, i was going to do something about it but then i just let it be (or it would still be on my computer unfinished)

i've missed writing. unlike SOME ppl (not naming any names) i'm not good enough at writing and posting fics about cigarettes and sounding like every second day

[minhosflower]

oh god the mpreg. don't remind me

i can't, even with all the inspiration in the world i can't come up with an ending. i hate the thing so much, it's terrible

why did i write it??

[kinkibum]

Not usually one for het fics (and that makes squirting pretty unusual for me too), but this is great! The way Onew takes care of her and dresses her and then hides behind a plant... jesus it is just how I would imagine him.

[minhosflower]

thank you!

onew is too much of a gentleman to just leave her alone :D of course it had to be something weird tho, like a plant of all things xD

[its_rayning]

There is an unspoken rule about not going after your best friends little sister (and he hopes Minseok will forgive him - if he ever finds out that is) but when said little sister shows up at a party more than half-drunk and wearing a dress for the first time in almost a decade (at least it’s been a decade since he saw her in a dress) that barely covers her ass rules don’t matter.

I perked up when I read 'MInseok' tbqh /dies. I don't usually read het but I really loved the way this panned out.

[minhosflower]

gotta make use of the fact that minho has an older brother ;)

i'm glad you liked it even tho it was het

[kiyabaybee]

Onew, that's so nice of you to make sure she gets home alright & smart too cause you don't get in trouble with Minseok
This is good for someone who has a fever
There's quite a few Fics with squirting Gwiboon actually...

[minhosflower]

squirting gwiboon explains why i haven't come across a squirting fic. but thanks for mentioning it, i'll give them a try

[hiddenmeghanis]

i enjoyed it.
i love your authors note xD
also, i agree with squickz, good job on the hot without the dirty talk. dirty talk is my favorite thing to write, so i'm always jealous when someone can write hot sex without it ;-;
good for you :D
and thank you for sharing!

[minhosflower]

thank you for reading ^^

i'm glad ppl find this hot bcz i was aiming for something hotter and dirtier and i feel it's kind of mild - the word dick is like only mentioned once (new personal record)