{fic} in a place like this

Jun 20, 2009 01:13

in a place like this, originally the colourless words.
Jin-centric, PG-13. hints at depression and stuff like that.
And you are so lonely that you'd (maybe) like to die.

どうぞ )

*johnny's entertainment, music: kat-tun, music: news, !fanfiction

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ununoriginal June 20 2009, 16:02:49 UTC
this was beautifully written and very realistic. i can also relate to wat jin's feeling. thanks for sharing this :)

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mintstars June 21 2009, 19:09:04 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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atenishinai June 20 2009, 18:34:48 UTC
remembers hears is the dial tone. -- remembers hearing

And that's all I saw XD Mou~ The end was nice.

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mintstars June 21 2009, 16:58:01 UTC
whoops, that's what I get for changing sentences @ two AM. XD thanks bb <3

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trivialaffair June 23 2009, 04:12:01 UTC
That was lovely, and though the ending kind of hurts in quiet sort of way, I think it's perfect the way you ended this.

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mintstars June 24 2009, 05:50:29 UTC
Thank you very much! I was afraid the ending wouldn't quite click, as I wrote it before everything else, so thanks! <3

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