W&L: Part 3.

[mireya_11]

When he wakes up next day he feels just fine.

It’s a sunny day

and his leg is not screamming

his head is not on fire

and his bed is more welcoming that never

Oh, everything is so surreal

maybe I’m already death

But he’s sweating

and death people don’t sweat.

Right?

He goes to the living room and directly to the piano, his piano.

It’s just 7 am

Comments

[smutnazi]

I like the brief writing style on this, it just drags you down through it and forces you through it. However, if he's taking his vicodin to kill himself, he'd be dead from respiratory failure after oh, say, 3 hours? Death by paracetamol would take about 48-72 hours, before his liver would be shutting down from the ungodly amount of paracetamol it's processing, but death by overdose would happen long before. Making it slightly clearer as to what he's taking, well, that would be helpful.

[mireya_11]

Oh yes, I forgot to mention it
he's not taking Vicodin

I see that you haven't read the first chapter
so I think that that's my mistake
the prologue is here http://mireya-11.livejournal.com/2981.html
and the first chapter is here http://mireya-11.livejournal.com/3547.html

I'm pretty sure that you're right about what you're saying
'cause I don't have the lighless* idea of medicine
I'm just a wanna-be-of-doctor ^^U

But I checked tylenol and they said that someone might die deppending of his health

I'm not pretty sure though, I can always get wrong :D

Thanks a lot for the complimment and for the advice too
let me check it ;)

[smutnazi]

Ah, there's a prologue. I managed to hop in on the first chappie, and get to the second, but I missed the bit before the first.

That's the one problem with fic on livejournal, it's hard to figure out where things begin. (that, and formatting becomes something of a nightmare, especially with a style such as yours, that's intended to be brief and force you through it, rather than let you wander through it.)

[mireya_11]

Yes ^^U hope you understand better the story! I'd love to read from you when the next chapter is here

Yes you're terribly right u_u
LJ is very complicated for me xDDD

Aw well
I'll take that as a compliment ^^

I never understood pretty well blogs or things like that so... you can imagine how lost I am xD

[vurt_junkie]

At least his leg is bothering him...

I really hope he's enjoying those cookies!

Just one day left? Eep!

[mireya_11]

I guess you wanted to say 'his leg is not...'?

hahahaha
yes... poor House *evil laugh*

Yeah sorry
but a lot of things can happen in just one day ^^
and after all
we don't know if it's really one day ;)

I can always get crazy at the end ^^U