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Jan 23, 2012 14:08

I waited until my son was safely in school and my husband at work to leave the house. Yes,I was scared but worry for my son was stronger than my fear. I walked past the garden, the pepper plants at the border almost visibly absorbing the morning heat into its fruit, past the citrus and mango trees and their parties of gossiping birds, and finally ( Read more... )

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pixiebelle January 24 2012, 02:11:53 UTC
Very creepy. I would love to hear more.

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mirrorfortress January 25 2012, 09:35:44 UTC
Thank you :) there's more to this that's been knocking around my head for a while. If a future prompt permits, I'll finish it for Idol. :)

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rumplebuttkins January 24 2012, 21:41:47 UTC
Yeah, this is begging for more. But, in itself, you've created a really interesting world that seems much more dense than the story lets on.

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mirrorfortress January 25 2012, 09:32:53 UTC
Thank you. :).

Papa Bois and the douen are characters from my country's folklore, I used those legends as the base for this.

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createdestiny January 25 2012, 02:52:43 UTC
Wow, I've never heard of a "douen." Intriguing.

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mirrorfortress January 25 2012, 09:27:49 UTC
Thank you :)

Douens are characters from our folklore.

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karmasoup January 25 2012, 16:34:36 UTC
Ooooh, great start! Hoping to get the rest.

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noodledays January 25 2012, 18:08:41 UTC
ooh, what a scary quandary for a mother. D:

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