Brushback Pitch

[mirrorfortress]

We'd been at the monastery for a full day before I allowed myself to relax. The monks had built a separate building to house outsiders who wanted to experience the peace and quiet of their daily lives, without the rigid discipline they required. It was far enough from their main building that we weren't tripping over their robes every minute, yet

Comments

[rayaso]

This was so much fun to read! You packed a lot of inventiveness into this entry. Great work!

[magazhchi]

A great read and it made me curious about the backstory of these characters.

[encrefloue]

That was delightful! Love the tone of the piece, and the glimpses into the world that you've built around it.

[eternal_ot]

This was an interesting read and a great take on the prompt. I am hoping there is more of this world this season because I enjoyed reading it :)

[sinnamongirl]

Thank you for your entry!