Brushback Pitch

[mirrorfortress]

We'd been at the monastery for a full day before I allowed myself to relax. The monks had built a separate building to house outsiders who wanted to experience the peace and quiet of their daily lives, without the rigid discipline they required. It was far enough from their main building that we weren't tripping over their robes every minute, yet

Comments

[penpusher]

Fascinating plot points that can lead to a lot more dramatic tension and release!

[murielle]

Oh! Love this! I just love this! And I am hoping that as the prompts present opportunity we will see more of the twins...even the princess...and a monk or two. (Happy smile)

The only thing wanting with your entry was...more!

[my_name_is_jenn]

This was a great read!