Three little words

Oct 31, 2011 19:22

**Trigger Warning. This entry deals with harm to a child.**It's my fault ( Read more... )

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notodette November 1 2011, 03:23:16 UTC
Holy Jesus fuck.

I'm voting for you because this is well done, but, man, I do not like the content of this entry. My heart breaks.

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mirrorfortress November 1 2011, 13:03:56 UTC
Thanks.

Not too fond of the content myself, but I'd been researching some crime cases for evidence collection procedures and this came to mind.

The real cases were much worse. :/

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frecklestars November 1 2011, 14:48:21 UTC
O_o

Whoa.

Well done. Reading this was like a punch in the stomach.

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mirrorfortress November 1 2011, 17:56:45 UTC
Thanks.

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rumplebuttkins November 1 2011, 16:22:22 UTC
I hope the darkness of this doesn't deter people from the fact that it was well written interesting. I like this.

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mirrorfortress November 1 2011, 17:57:35 UTC
Thanks, hopefully I can write something less twisted next time.

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muchtooarrogant November 1 2011, 17:38:25 UTC
A story which opens with a wife watching her husband being eaten in week one, and now a mother poisoning her child in week two. If you don't change the tone in week three, I'm going to start to wonder about you. *grin*

Teasing aside, this was very well done. Short, so every line has to both inform and pack a punch, and each one does.

Dan

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mirrorfortress November 1 2011, 18:03:59 UTC
*grins* I've been reading some heavy stuff lately so it's coming out, sorry. Thanks for reading.

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noodledays November 1 2011, 18:28:00 UTC
holy geez, what a terrifying vignette. D:

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mirrorfortress November 3 2011, 14:18:46 UTC
Glad it was effective. Thanks for reading.

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