A story which opens with a wife watching her husband being eaten in week one, and now a mother poisoning her child in week two. If you don't change the tone in week three, I'm going to start to wonder about you. *grin*
Teasing aside, this was very well done. Short, so every line has to both inform and pack a punch, and each one does.
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I'm voting for you because this is well done, but, man, I do not like the content of this entry. My heart breaks.
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Not too fond of the content myself, but I'd been researching some crime cases for evidence collection procedures and this came to mind.
The real cases were much worse. :/
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Whoa.
Well done. Reading this was like a punch in the stomach.
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Teasing aside, this was very well done. Short, so every line has to both inform and pack a punch, and each one does.
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