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Fic: Don't You Know, It's Gonna Be Alright (Part 2)

Jul 15, 2011 00:37

Title: Don’t You Know, It’s Gonna Be Alright (Part 2)
Pairing: John/Paul
Rating: PG-13, I guess, but only because of a little swearing. And a lot of sad.
Warnings: Angst, boy-on-boy cuddling, snotty teenagers, boys-in-pain.
Summary: “He tiptoed over to the bed and sat down next to John. He hated to wake him, but he knew letting him sleep longer wouldn’ ( Read more... )

fic, john/paul

Comments 27

xhesxmyxloverx July 16 2011, 14:32:39 UTC

this is just beautiful. I love how you've gone about this situation, and it's wonderful to see how you capture the love betweent the two even though it's plstonic at the beginning, the growing relationship is beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

miss_lizzy777 July 17 2011, 06:25:03 UTC

Thank you! I try to make the progression seem natural. Glad it's working.

tini_91 July 16 2011, 16:59:48 UTC

That was very lovely. I read both parts in one go and I'd love to read more. :)

miss_lizzy777 July 17 2011, 06:26:28 UTC

Thanks! Compliments from you count double because OMFG I LOVE your work! :)

I'm planning to continue. I'm not sure where I'm going with it yet, but I have some ideas.

samberrie July 16 2011, 19:00:12 UTC

Oh my goodness. :')
That ending was so wonderful. It really did bring tears to my eyes!
You're a great writer! You really know how to create the mood..
Oh and I found no typo's btw. XD So is this just a two part thing or is it going to have more parts? I mean, you could definately end it here, but it would be awesome of you to continue this!

miss_lizzy777 July 17 2011, 06:27:53 UTC

Wow, tears! I feel like a success now :P

Thanks a lot. I plan on doing more. Hopefully it will take me less than a year to get the next chapter up XD

eppyschweppy July 17 2011, 19:24:08 UTC

omg aw
it's not often that a fic puts tears in my eyes but you've done it
I loved this, it was so emotional and beautiful. I loved the first half as well when I read it, and this was a fantastic follow up. Are you going to write another part or leave it at that?

miss_lizzy777 July 18 2011, 06:53:35 UTC

Aw, thanks! I'm happy it's having the desired effect. I am indeed planning at least one more chapter. I'm not entirely sure what's next, but the boys tend to write themselves, so I'm sure something will work out!

beagle_agent July 19 2011, 14:19:52 UTC

Beautiful! I loved how often Paul catches himself thinking in terms of "love" about John suddenly. And then John tells him that he loves him.....so sweet.
Looking forward to the next chapter. These boys tend to write themselves, I experience that whenever I write stories....so I hope they can convince you that there will be more than one more chapter at least!

Astrid

miss_lizzy777 July 20 2011, 06:31:07 UTC

Thanks! I wanted it to feel like a natural progression where Paul has basically felt this way for a long time, but is only now realizing it because of this situation where they're both vulnerable. I don't think John even quite realizes what he's said yet... >.>

They do write themselves, yes! Makes my job easier =) There will be more. I hope to have it up fairly quickly.