Owner of a Lonely Heart

[misshigherpower]

Title: Owner of a Lonely Heart
Fandom: Glee
Characters: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 5,021
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After Finn breaks up with Rachel, she decides that she’s never going to let anyone hurt her like that ever again.
Author's Note: This is a monster that kind of got away from me. It could potentially be the worst thing I've ever

Comments

[sophistikated28]

What a cute story!

Your song choice for Finn made me laugh - I recently performed that song with Foreigner, and it is a very Finn sort of song.

[misshigherpower]

Thanks!

It's a total Finn song. I literally just went through my iPod and picked 80s songs, but this screamed Finn.

[kimmy_77]

This is more than ok. It's wonderful! All I want in this world is for Rachel to have friends, real, true friends. And she has them here. I love the way that you spilt up the kids, my favs are together! It's just brilliant and happy and I love that people are appreciating Rachel and seeing how awesome she is. I wanted to high five Mike and Santana when they stood up for Rachel to Quinn and Mercedes! Hell yeah! This rocked! Fantastic job! :D

[misshigherpower]

Thank you so much.

I really want Rachel to have friends too. I feel so lonely for her. When I see her off by herself, it makes me so sad. I hated being lonely in high school.

[roncha78]

This is more than kind of okay!! I absolutely loved the friendships, the fact that Rachel thinks Joss Whedon is a God (because let's face it, he is) and that Puck was so not Puck in this but also totally was (if that makes any sense..).

Great fill!

[misshigherpower]

Thank you!

I definitely worship at the altar of Joss. I think that's what I love most about Fic!Puck. He can still be his douchey self, but we can add to those layers that they show us every once in a while.

[wander_lust_79]

awesome job!!! This is steller!!! I loved every word!

[misshigherpower]

Thanks!

[druidspell]

This is definitely more than "kinda okay"; I loved how you developed Rachel's team into friends, and the easing into a relationship between Puck and Rachel was absolutely amazing. I hope you keep writing more, because you are awesome.

[misshigherpower]

Thank you so much. I'm definitely going to be writing more. It's too much fun not to.