For the sake of YaMaki - Third Person

May 12, 2009 22:34


Just a small piece for you guys to apologize for not updating recently.
I promise I'll be much better now that I'm on summer break. :)
and i have a lot of stuff to give you guys.

Title: Third Person
Pairing: insinuated yamaki
Rating: PG
Word Count: 842
Summary: The only way you know someone is in love is when you are the one sitting on the outside ( Read more... )

one shot, yamaki

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Yayyy! An update from missiemae! [throws confetti] redsn0wflakes May 13 2009, 04:25:48 UTC
I'm glad you're back! I really missed reading your work. T__T And I'm totally hyped to be the first to comment. Woot!

Yes! Yes yes yes yes yes!!! I just love the idea of Yamaki through a 3rd wheel's point of view...especially one that harbors unrequited feelings for either of the two. It just makes the relationship between Yamaki that much more meaningful and deep. The feeling of bitter envy for what they have and never being able to get in between them just establishes the extent of the feelings they have for each other.

But besides that, I have a thing against Masami anyhow...so I totally love the oh-so-subtle bashing you gave her. Self-centered, egotistic...then again I could be looking into this too deep because of my bias. Haha...I was seriously cackling like mad because of the mental picture you painted of Maki outshining Masami and the intimacy between Yamaki. Of course, Pi's hug for Maki is much much different from that with Masami. She won't be able to experience the same, even on set. His heart belongs to Maki ( ... )

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Re: Yayyy! An update from missiemae! [throws confetti] missiemae May 13 2009, 05:51:47 UTC
you need to be my friend on MSN.
we need to talk more. =)

because i love u and your work.
and this healthy comment makes me happy.
i encourage long comments! but i'll let you know i was surprised for a second! hahaha.

and happy belated birthday sweetie. i have a gift for you on the way... ^^.

please let me know how to contact you. haha.
you can find my info in the user info.

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Re: Yayyy! An update from missiemae! [throws confetti] xcry May 13 2009, 17:37:53 UTC
I shouldn't butt in, but I totally want to join in the MSNing. >_<;; Will comment on Missiemae's work now.

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Re: Yayyy! An update from missiemae! [throws confetti] redsn0wflakes May 14 2009, 00:18:19 UTC
Ah! I use aim instead of msn. But since you listed your aim, maybe I'll catch you on sometimes (my sn is redsn0wflakes, very original, I know)? I'd love to talk to you. And especially since school is almost out, hopefully we can! Yay summer! And I'd love to talk to you too xcry! ^^

I'm glad you like long comments. I love them too. ^^ But from your surprise, I see I don't leave them enough. I will make an effort from now on. But if you keep churning out awesome fics like this, it won't be hard for me at all. ^^

Aww...thank you! I can't wait. I'm getting so spoiled...first xcry, now you. [Giddy] Yayy!

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xcry May 13 2009, 17:40:29 UTC
I read this how many times now? It never gets tiring, especially since there's non-direct bashing, yet still bashing in the end of Masami (sorry masami fans).

But man, I love the part where Yamapi looks at maki a certain way and Masami sees the googly eyes he's making at our Hime-chan.

and it hurts. >_<; I've been through that.

But anyway, I lovers this story and can't wait for the other ones soon. <33

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hyun_jae09 May 14 2009, 19:51:08 UTC
Eep. I love the raw emotion coming from Masami. Felt kind of bad for her, but Yamaki is so romantic.

Oh, and Hello. x'DDD sorry I am so scattered after reading your piece.

Before I never read a lot of fanfics, but after redsn0wflakes introduced your fics to me, (and this is the first one I read) I am like "WoW! Sugoii!"

Lol. Heheh. I apologize for any weirdness you feel from my totally random comment.

Good work. <3

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missiemae May 14 2009, 21:58:25 UTC
uwahhhh hello. ♥
thank you for reading~! and believe me, i felt bad for Masami (A VERY TINY SMALL AMOUNT) when i wrote this. xD

it's very nice to meet you and thank you so much for leaving such a sweet comment. i'll have to thank redsn0wflakes, shes too sweet!

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idajj May 14 2009, 20:38:43 UTC
im not going to say much.
because your posts and stories always makes me lose my eloquency!
all i have to say that this love.
you are love.
yamaki are love.

totally love ittt!!

p.s :it has been so long since you posted something!
looking forward to moree!

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missiemae May 14 2009, 21:59:15 UTC
lsdfjlas i miss u.
im sorry i haven't posted in awhile, and i'm quite positive i do owe you a piece. :]
it'll be out soon, so keep an eye out for it!

you are too sweet to me.

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shinae183 May 15 2009, 04:59:27 UTC
this is the first time i saw a fic of Yamaki from the 3rd party point of view.and I like it, Love it very much...its wonderful and a very rare kind of fic indeed.It does show how deep their love toward each other.And the jealousy part shows how picture prefect when they are together and also that one special smile that one offer to another.

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missiemae May 17 2009, 03:52:40 UTC
you're toooooooooo sweeeeeet!
im really glad you like it. =)
yamaki are meant to be.
no one can break that. ^^
thank you for reading.

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