Nouveau vernis (Prompt: Excitement)

Sep 30, 2010 14:54

Prompt: Excitement
Title: Nouveau vernis
Author: otterandterrier 
Characters/Ship: Fleur/Bill
Rating/Warning: PG13/Only a very mild sentence is subject to warning.
Word Count: 474

Thanks to exartemarte for the beta work :) )

excitement

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mollywheezy September 30 2010, 19:26:42 UTC
This is great! I loved Fleur's understanding and insight into how her beauty affects others and her gratitude that the Weasleys finally saw past it. Very well done!

Have you thought of signing up for bwfd_ldws? ;)

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otterandterrier October 1 2010, 03:09:10 UTC
Oh, thank you!
Well, I feel somehow flattered but this was my first B/F fic ever, haha! And I don't have much time right now :/

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lectura35 September 30 2010, 21:02:08 UTC
This was just beautiful, Dessi!
I truly like seeing Fleur as a "no dumb blonde". The girl really has my respect :)
And I agree with mollywheezy! I find your writing romantic, glamorous,.... perfect for Fleur and Bill ;)
Lovely work, hon!

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otterandterrier October 1 2010, 03:11:05 UTC
Glamorous, really? Wow, thanks!
I bet people thought the fever really got into me, not choosing RHr! xD

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honourweasley12 October 5 2010, 06:43:38 UTC
Lovely work! I really enjoyed your view on Fleur. I really gained an appreciation for her at the end of HBP, and you showed her true self in your story. Good job :)

I liked this line:

The day Bill made love to her, all the money in the world became Leprechaun gold.

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otterandterrier October 6 2010, 12:05:29 UTC
Thank you! Yes, I'm of the same opinion... I'm glad that she turned out good in the end, haha.

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