Prompt: Excitement Title: Nouveau vernis Author: otterandterrier Characters/Ship: Fleur/Bill Rating/Warning: PG13/Only a very mild sentence is subject to warning. Word Count: 474
This is great! I loved Fleur's understanding and insight into how her beauty affects others and her gratitude that the Weasleys finally saw past it. Very well done!
This was just beautiful, Dessi! I truly like seeing Fleur as a "no dumb blonde". The girl really has my respect :) And I agree with mollywheezy! I find your writing romantic, glamorous,.... perfect for Fleur and Bill ;) Lovely work, hon!
Lovely work! I really enjoyed your view on Fleur. I really gained an appreciation for her at the end of HBP, and you showed her true self in your story. Good job :)
I liked this line:
The day Bill made love to her, all the money in the world became Leprechaun gold.
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Well, I feel somehow flattered but this was my first B/F fic ever, haha! And I don't have much time right now :/
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I truly like seeing Fleur as a "no dumb blonde". The girl really has my respect :)
And I agree with mollywheezy! I find your writing romantic, glamorous,.... perfect for Fleur and Bill ;)
Lovely work, hon!
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I bet people thought the fever really got into me, not choosing RHr! xD
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I liked this line:
The day Bill made love to her, all the money in the world became Leprechaun gold.
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