Looovely! I don't what else to say... I'm out of words, haha. I loved the concept, I loved the use of the prompt, and I loved the magical vibe to it. Great job!
Oh. I don't know what to say! This is so freaking lovely!!
Really. So awesome. I love it. I love you. xoxo
These lines KILLED me...
"She was captive, ruined, taken, screwed, and fucked up." -These words are so well placed, some almost reflecting a positive note while all still sounding a bit chained when put together... it's like she is trapped but is okay with it... and I love that concept.
"Influenced by the ache of his gaze" -ACHE of his gaze... so perfect.
"Influenced by his presence or the hurtful lack of it. And influenced by the binding certainty that he wasn´t the person she would have chosen to live with, but he was the only person she just couldn´t live without." -Beautiful!
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I don't what else to say... I'm out of words, haha. I loved the concept, I loved the use of the prompt, and I loved the magical vibe to it. Great job!
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I´m really glad you liked it!
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Really.
So awesome.
I love it.
I love you.
xoxo
These lines KILLED me...
"She was captive, ruined, taken, screwed, and fucked up."
-These words are so well placed, some almost reflecting a positive note while all still sounding a bit chained when put together... it's like she is trapped but is okay with it... and I love that concept.
"Influenced by the ache of his gaze"
-ACHE of his gaze... so perfect.
"Influenced by his presence or the hurtful lack of it. And influenced by the binding certainty that he wasn´t the person she would have chosen to live with, but he was the only person she just couldn´t live without."
-Beautiful!
And the last line is wonderful.
I am so thrilled and flattered and just. wow.
THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!!
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*blushing*
I´m really thrilled you liked it, hon :)
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