Lies My Lover Told Me

[mixedupxmind]

Title: Lies My Lover Told Me
Author: keepthexfaith
Pairing: OMCxOMC
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Not real, obviously. A figment of my imagination.
Warnings:
Strong language
Character death

Comments

[zayetshaped]

that's so D: >__<

i liked it though/ >.<

the last thing you wrote, about writing a prologue if people don't get it... i don't undestand what's not to get? lol o.o

ah, btw, i hope you take constructive criticism well;

"He taped the message up next to the message and smiled through his tears."

was that meant to be he taped the message up next to the flowers? :]

again, i really liked it. o.o well done! ^_^

[keepthexfaith]

YAY for feedback ^^ I'm glad you like it.

Oh, the whole prologue shizz was just cause I'd posted it on my blogggy thing somewhere and a bunch of people hadn't got it, so I figured I'd just chuck it in there.

And....thankyousomuchforpointingthatout what mistake? >_>

[zayetshaped]

oh o.k. lol

it's okay. =]

[zayetshaped]

and lol, you still haven't fixed the mistake. =PP