that was precious ;~; i like how you ended it~ and the last two lines, how it connects to the beginning and just wraps everything up. write more adorable jeti ok ^__^
I like how the story flows, from childhood dream to then the dream-came-true in front of Tiffany. The whole plot connects with the title very well. The scene where Jessica just woke up and wished Tiffany is simple amazing, filled with much sweetness.
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thanks for reading~
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good work.!
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thanks for reading.
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And I really like the way you write <3
(rofl and thank you for distracting my studies)
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that was precious ;~; i like how you ended it~ and the last two lines, how it connects to the beginning and just wraps everything up. write more adorable jeti ok ^__^
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and this comment actually makes sense. gj :D
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This is a good one-shot. :)
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