Fic: The Tickets

Jan 17, 2011 00:01

Title: The Tickets
Author: Mneme2434
Characters/Pairings: Danny, Steve
Word Count:  1020
Rating: G
Genre: Gen, pre-slash
Warnings: Not beta'd. All mistakes are mine.
Spoilers: Slight, very slight for Ke Kinohi
Summary: Danny gets a late Christmas present and decides to share it with Steve.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: I got this idea after watching ( Read more... )

fandom: hawaii 5-0, rating: g, pairing: steve/danny, fic: the tickets

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huntress69 January 17 2011, 06:35:38 UTC
Cute, and may I say - JETS RULE!! (ETA: I once suggested Danny had 2 fathers, but 2 moms is just as awesome.)

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mneme2434 January 17 2011, 06:42:18 UTC
Glad you liked it. My sister has been after me about writing someone with two moms, which is hard to do when most of my pairings have canon set parents. So, I gave in for Danny since his family is still up in the air beyond a few words and spoilers. I was going to do two dads but she twisted my arm. -sigh- sisters.

I am also rooting for the Jets, mostly because I don't like the Steelers...and I kind of want to see the Pack play the Jets at the superbowl. (I'm originally from the U.P. of Michigan. I am obligated to like the Packers...even if it's only during the playoffs.)

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samjohnsson January 17 2011, 09:43:36 UTC
A/N 2 - I might continue this after next weekend and turn this into a trilogy after the pro-bowl on the 30th. We shall see.

See, now you put me in the miserable position of rooting for the Jets. (And don't talk to me about Brady and today's game - at least give me good fic to console me in my time of agony?)

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mneme2434 January 17 2011, 11:31:32 UTC
Lol, I'll see what I can do.

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gizzi1213 January 17 2011, 13:10:57 UTC
Right now I'm doing an impersonation of Santonio Holmes' "flying like a Jet" after a TD reception, I'm still so jacked from winning yesterday.

The Jets/Steelers game was going to be a grudge match between the two of them, as Steve had this thing about cheering for the opposite team as him…and Danny was all about the Jets.

YES!!! GO JETS!!!

Oh...ahem...right review fic...pulls mind back into 5-0 Fandom.

Funny, I had just assumed that "mama" was Danny's grandmother! Guess I should have looked at the author's note first, huh?

Other than all the lovely references to the Jets (how did they work themselves back into my review???), my favorite line had to be:

“Danny,” Steve said, shaking his head slightly, “I trust you. Believe me. The thing I’m not trusting is what you consider to be a gift that has leftovers.”Loved the exchange between the boys, the banter was dead spot on for them ( ... )

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mneme2434 January 18 2011, 00:29:00 UTC
They better slaughter the Steelers. I want to see the Packers play the Jets at the superbowl (Because the Packers will kick the Bears ass. I swear it! Of course, if I'm wrong, this reply will come back to haunt me...)

I'm glad I got the banter and I'm also totally glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading.

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gizzi1213 January 18 2011, 00:40:17 UTC
Jets/Packers in the Super Bowl would be my preference come February 6th as well. I'd love to see both #6 seeds in the Super Bowl, it's never happened before.

I'd of course have to root for the Jets in the Super Bowl!!

I hope you decide to continue this series!

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americandirrty January 17 2011, 15:12:04 UTC
I love this!! That would definitely be awesome if you write more next weekend. I can't wait!

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mneme2434 January 18 2011, 00:27:07 UTC
We'll see. It will either be Danny gloating and Steve happy he doesn't have to wear a Jets jersey...or both Danny and Steve upset but for very different reasons.

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kitmerlot1213 January 17 2011, 15:19:58 UTC
This was just lovely!

I like that you have Danny coming from an unconventional family so that when he and Steve get together, no parent will flip out.

Nicely done :)

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mneme2434 January 18 2011, 00:25:54 UTC
That wasn't fully my intention, but I see what you mean. I always write parents reactions they way my parents reacted when my sister came out. With love and support. But I do get that not all parents are like that.

I'm glad you liked it.

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