Fic: Hidden in the World of Dawn - Chapter 2

[mneme2434]

Title: Hidden in the World of Dawn
Author: mneme2434 
Pairing: Danny/Steve
Rating: PG for this part (few swear words)
Beta: Nope, unless you count my school beta program…and that just does grammar.
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters and I am not making any money.
Word count: 2300ish
Summary: A new case takes Steve and Danny to a place like no

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

I wonder if Danny will start talking in his sleep and then Steve will learn all about his partner's secret yearning--WOO HOO!!

[mneme2434]

Hmmm, maybe/maybe not....I might just be mean to Steve a little bit longer. We may see Danny sleep talking but who knows what he's gunna say. Thanks for reading. ^_^

[mneme2434]

...Maybe....

Thanks for reading.

[lillyg]

You know I always want to read more from you... You know, like the end of BD... :p

[mneme2434]

....I'm working on it...I swear...

[shanachie_quill]

Looks good. Can't wait to read more.

Minor suggestion? Link back to the prior chapter so we can refresh our memories or make sure we read it? I wasn't sure until I started reading if I'd read the prior chapter or not. Other than that it looks good and I'm looking forward to the next one.

[mneme2434]

Lol, I actually have every intention of doing that either tonight or tomorrow some time. Glad you liked it.

[shanachie_quill]

Awesome! Sometimes I forget to do it or am just too lazy...but I also know not everyone thinks of it. :-) It's going swell so far. (The story that is.)

[purple_spock]

Okay, I am just so pumped for Danny to talk in his sleep. So pumped. Also, I sometimes feel sad for these two, as they are just so blind to what the rest of us see, and should start hooking up already. : D This was just as great as the first part, and I am really looking forward to chapter three!!

[mneme2434]

Aww, but that's part of what we love about them. If they weren't as clueless, we wouldn't be having as much fun with them...Glad you liked it. ^_^