Of ghosts and glass

Sep 05, 2011 22:09


Of ghosts and glass
one-shot; >2000 words

angst (mild violence)
Plot: Yoona finds comfort in the dark. Other times, her demons find her there first.

Off-note: finally popped the first-fic cherry. And damn, I didn't think it'd be this long.

everyone I love, get back from me now. everyone I love, I need you now. )

yoona, fanfic, snsd, oneshot

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evadinglethargy September 6 2011, 15:28:58 UTC
I shall read this. Tomorrow. T_T /le saves spot/

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evadinglethargy September 23 2011, 06:07:48 UTC
Okay I failed. I read this earlier but wasn't able to comment then. Now I shall~

How do you say "The brightness shined very brightly" but for darkness instead?

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mocharin September 23 2011, 07:32:39 UTC
You know, I have no idea o__O The darkness... something-ed very darkly?
(I looked it up)
The antonyms for "shine" include dim, dull and lacklustre.

/fails at English

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evadinglethargy September 23 2011, 17:05:37 UTC
Haha. I have no idea either, but that's how I view your fic. :3 :-bd

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laestrygonians September 11 2011, 03:38:43 UTC
OH GOD. YOONA ;~; this is really good. The descriptions are... idk what to say. It good.

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mocharin September 11 2011, 06:57:51 UTC
that's very kind of you to say~ thank you very much for reading.

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laestrygonians September 11 2011, 07:13:12 UTC
Its really good hahahah. thanks for reading my fic too ;)

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yongsowonhi September 11 2011, 14:04:23 UTC
Woah. Yeah, indeed, that was dark. At first I was wondering who it was that came to visit her, then I realized that 'he' was just a figment of her imagination/ some supernatural being.

This was artsy. Haha. I liked it ^^ Looking forward to more works (hopefully less angsty ones) from you ~

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mocharin September 11 2011, 15:32:21 UTC
I certainly didn't think I was going to write something as dark as this when I started writing, and I doubt I'd be able to write an even darker/angst-ier fic after this one o__0 so yes, much, much much lighter works will be produced, hopefully very soon (depending on my mood, I guess >_>)

but hey, thanks for reading and telling me what you thought!

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yongsowonhi September 11 2011, 16:54:35 UTC
Yaye okay ^^ I did read your A/N, telling you just in case it seemed like I didn't. (:
You're welcome, it was the least I could do for you. ;D

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mocharin September 11 2011, 22:10:58 UTC
oh, you're right, it IS in my a/n. I totally forgot what I said there, haha.

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