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Part 1/2 bluebright_l March 21 2012, 01:52:54 UTC
When the door to her chambers flew open, banging on the cold stone wall, Asha took a long moment to savor the taste of Qarl on her tongue, salty and masculine and him, before lifting her head to stare frankly at her future husband ( ... )

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Part 2/2 bluebright_l March 21 2012, 01:53:54 UTC
Qarl cursed under his breath, wrapping a hand around her neck, blunt nails digging into her skin. She could feel each sound she made as his fingers tightened around her throat, and by the Drowned God, Tris was moaning against her, sucking one of Qarl’s balls into his mouth, then dragging his tongue along the spot where she was impaling herself on Qarl ( ... )

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Re: Part 2/2 deryn March 21 2012, 02:07:48 UTC
....to be continued, it sounds like!

Ah, my filthy bb Asha, I love you almost as much as bluebright_l right now. :D

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Re: Part 2/2 bluebright_l March 21 2012, 03:40:12 UTC
So glad you like it! And I have other Asha prompts I'm considering, so keep an eye out. :D

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Re: Part 2/2 a_cherrytree March 22 2012, 03:23:45 UTC
that was great!
and oh I please do keep filling the Asha prompts, I would love you forever.

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Re: Part 2/2 lainemontgomery March 21 2012, 02:28:49 UTC
Oh. Em. Gee. HOT! This might sound like a strange compliment, but you've really got a knack for writing erotic scenes. Everything's awesomely smutty and balls-to-the-wall, but it's articulate and beautifully-phrased at the same time. I don't even usually dig Greyjoy fics, and I'm in awe of this. Brilliant!

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Re: Part 2/2 bluebright_l March 21 2012, 03:41:51 UTC
D'aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it, especially since you're not normally a fan of Greyjoy fics.

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Re: Part 2/2 semicolonlife March 22 2012, 03:07:53 UTC
Aww, man this was hot. Fuck yeah, take charge women!

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