naming

[faegrian_enid]

We start with names for everything

Comments

[photoflood]

this definitely had more structure than any of MY poems. the subject matter was interesting, and i think something everyone thinks about at some point in their lives. you can really read into it in so many ways, or just take it in quickly, and i think that's a good quality for any poem/writing to have. i dont know how long you've been writing, but i feel you have a lot of room to grow (as, i feel, do i & most "writers"), but trust me, it's a good thing!

[oohfeisty]

you'll see what you take time to notice.
i like that a lot.

i really like this poem; the last stanza is my favorite.

[mrshannibal]

wow