I really enjoyed this fic! Loved the (before) and (after) narrative structure, which both build to the realization that Mark loved Eduardo without realizing it until it was almost too late, and the heart-warming resolution. Also, I teared up at the idea of Mark giving up his resurrection to stay with Eduardo.
it's beautiful~~ my heart broke for wardo who was so sad and damaged... luckily both mark and wardo got a second chance ^0^
i like the journey how mark realised his love to wardo although i was a little bit disappointed that mark didn't stay with wardo in the other world :( i know wardo kept pushing mark to go back, but mark, how could you let wardo go again? :((
h=Holy shit, I'm sitting here crying. When mark left askjgdfjk tears everywhere and then stella saved them both~ (which, yeah, I had a feeling~~ man. So glad I was right) and now happy tears and ugh this is so perfect. Just perfect and heartbreaking and beautiful. The emotions, I just can't. I love how you paced it as well, it flowed so smoothly. So, yeah, I love this, a lot :3
The fic was so utterly beautifull!!!!!!!aaaawwww.....really it directly touched my heart....poor poor eduardo and sad mark,he literally killed himslf bcoz his wardo was dead.....mark's confused feelings and depressed wardo....this fic is a perfection really....this is so so beautifull like i really dont have the exact words to convey how i am feeling right now.....and they ending was so so awesome....i was like so so so damn happy for the boys....really the ending was so good....the fic had PERFECT amount of sadness,angst,fluff...its just so PERFECT......adore you a lot..plz write more and thnx a lot lot lot for sharing it with us......lots of love....<333333 *hugs*
Thank you! I don't really know what to say because I've never been showered with so many compliments before. Thank you for reading, and commenting. I hope I'll get to write more for them :)
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my heart broke for wardo who was so sad and damaged...
luckily both mark and wardo got a second chance ^0^
i like the journey how mark realised his love to wardo
although i was a little bit disappointed that mark didn't stay with wardo in the other world :(
i know wardo kept pushing mark to go back, but mark, how could you let wardo go again? :((
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I get why you don't like it. Tbh, I don't think Mark would leave again, but I didn't want to leave them in the miserable suicide world.
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<3
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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It sort of killed me to write it, so I'm glad I'm not the only one suffering because of this fic lol
Thank you for commenting.
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