Mechanical Michelangelo part 35

Jun 11, 2005 21:58

part 35 )

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bliss_ June 11 2005, 21:16:57 UTC
Ohhh good stuff! I have been waiting for an update! :)

Thanks!!

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mohawking June 12 2005, 17:10:50 UTC
glad you liked! I've 7 days in of working 8 days in a row, my brain has slowed way down lol!

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hudgirl June 11 2005, 21:47:45 UTC
I hope this isn't going to be another story where Brian's on nightmare of reliving the bashing is going to go unaddressed. Justin's will too of course, but it seems most time it does. Brian's is the one that just ends up being ignored. This story...powerful, but damage on damage on damage. It'll be interesting to see what you do with it all. Always waiting for the next chapter. Shirls

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mohawking June 12 2005, 17:16:54 UTC
I've taken my time exploring the story so far (it took me a handful of chapters just to get B/J in the same room!;) i'm sure there's enough time to explore everything else ::grin:: I'm a major fan of not short changing myself (and you) I don't want to rush it and end things too quickly without resolving the major issues. I only hope I do it justice! Thank you for the fb!

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mistress_marsha June 12 2005, 00:42:08 UTC
Brian is so insecure at this point....not knowing whether to trust his feelings or not. Does he love Justin enough to fight for him? Will he let the closeness between Cam and Justin interfere with his desires to get Justin back?

The desperation that Brian is feeling is almost palatable. I hope when Justin is well enough he will ask him what went on between him and Cam. Isn't wasn't like they were lovers.....at least not in the romantic sense. They did what they had to do to survive. Brian, of all people, should understand survival.

He's better not run this time or the lost boys will drag his sorry ass back to the hospital and tie him down if necessary. It's time for Brian to face his demons and banish them once and for all.

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mohawking June 12 2005, 17:20:40 UTC
the lost boys rule ::grin:: they'd definitely drag Brian back by his skinny ass;-)

Brian is feeling majorly insecure. He doesn't do relationships...and when he does admit his feelings for someone by going to a dance, something bad happens, it's like confirmation that he was right, relationships don't give you anything buyt pain.

and even feeling like that doesn't stop the green eyed monster peeking out when talking to cam and the boys;)

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MM 35 mdlaw June 12 2005, 02:42:00 UTC
Brian is going to need help, as much as Justin. He should turn to Cam too. This is so good, such a different take on the situation. I love it.
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Re: MM 35 mohawking June 12 2005, 17:25:33 UTC
cam has a good head on his shoulders, and he loves justin in a friendly, unselfish way and wants him to be happy, and also he wants the people that justin loves to be happy (except jenn, he's not too sure about her;)

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ladypanther03 June 12 2005, 08:28:15 UTC
Brian's pretty far gone, when the most important thing is that Justin called Cam's name.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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mohawking June 12 2005, 17:27:09 UTC
it's like all his brain can cope with is the insignificant things because the important stuff, like, will justin be brain damaged? is just too much to deal with...plus, green eyed monster;-)

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