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mohawking

Mechanical Michelangelo part 39

Jul 02, 2005 20:47

Sorry it's taken me so long to get this part out...major writer's block kicked in, I had what looked like a photograph of this chapter in my brain but i couldn't get it to move on the page--argh! I had to fight my way out of it;-)( part 39 )

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mo_52 July 2 2005, 20:16:42 UTC

Wow. That was really great.

"Never had anyone been so loving, so tender and so thorough. Maybe he only knew how to take violence now. “I can’t.” His breath came in short spurts. “Get…off…me.”" This was just wonderfully written.

mohawking July 7 2005, 19:04:54 UTC

Thank you!

burnitbackward July 3 2005, 01:06:10 UTC

*sob* worth the wait

mohawking July 7 2005, 19:05:17 UTC

thank you! glad you thought so:)

brokenwingfairy July 3 2005, 03:06:17 UTC

*sniffles* poor Justin.

"he looked into clear blue eyes that hid a wealth of pain. He looked so young in his makeshift pyjamas, his baggy t-shirt pulled over his knees in a childlike fashion" the cuteness of that entire scene *sigh* I cant wait to read more.

mohawking July 7 2005, 19:06:57 UTC

more soon!:) thanks for the fb!

MM 39 mdlaw July 3 2005, 04:07:42 UTC

Wow, Justin's been hurt so much, but Brian really seems to be trying to do the right thing. I can't believe he offered to call Cam. m

Re: MM 39 mohawking July 7 2005, 19:11:50 UTC

He's getting over his jealousy! hopefully;)

theaeblackthorn July 3 2005, 11:35:53 UTC

*sniffles and squishes the justin...even tho he might not appreciate that, oh second thoughts, squishes the brian*

Sidenote: Cam, yay!

mohawking July 7 2005, 19:12:36 UTC

the boys could probably do with a hug lol!