Wordy sentences....

Aug 24, 2005 11:15

The trip through the mountains was solemn and careful as if he did not want to upset any of the natural denizens that haunted this place. We passed numerous mounds, sleepy from their daily siesta’s under the baking sun of the day. Wispy willowing vines and bushes danced in the gentle breeze under the starry night. Even the dead ones, dried up ( Read more... )

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sunniegirl August 24 2005, 18:47:31 UTC
*Sighs* That was beautiful!!!

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mona_myfr August 24 2005, 19:10:05 UTC
I like my writing to be not just descriptive but poetic. Makes it more lengthy but that's just what I like. ;) thanks!

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rathomus August 25 2005, 12:33:02 UTC
oooooh...i like the way you speak....very very beautiful

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angels_heart27 August 26 2005, 16:43:50 UTC
Wow once again your creative ink @ work! ~Smilez~ That was just magical! :)

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