A small contribution to begin the monaboyd celebration

Jun 17, 2013 12:49


Title: Irrepressible
Author: foxrafer
Characters: Billy/Dom
Rating: G
Word count: 1,699 words
Disclaimer: All make-believe and not written for financial gain
Warnings: None
Author's note: AU written for monaboyd_month 2013. This is very Billy-centric.

Irrepressible )

fic: g

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rubyelf June 17 2013, 17:25:59 UTC
Great start-off!

I love the way Billy just sort of slips into that numbness over time, and then in the last paragraph how alive he is again when things are finally right...

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glass_moment June 17 2013, 20:19:11 UTC
Aww, yay! I love how you brought this full circle with the prose as well as the storyline. So sweet!

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noalinnea June 17 2013, 20:40:21 UTC
Nicely done, I very much enjoyed this! I liked the slow build up overall those years, with other partners coming and going but only one constant remaining- Dom. That final scene with the long longed for kiss and then their contentment when they turn back towards the TV- a truly perfect ending. Thanks a lot for sharing this with us!

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carribbe June 18 2013, 02:41:23 UTC
And what a nice beginning, too - thank you.

The build up was killing me there. I wanted to shake both of them, but you brought them back together for me at last.

I actually enjoyed the level of uncomfortable tension they endured. It makes things more interesting that way... :)

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dizzydame June 18 2013, 13:20:34 UTC
Oh, wow, this is lovely.

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