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[mondschein1]

Here's the thing. I was trying really hard to get the ds_flashfiction Inuit Story Challenge done, and it was really rough going because I hadn't written in so long. So of course I had to come up with this complex story structure -- and I never come up with needlessly complex story structures -- where I need to remember how to write not only Fraser and Ray, but

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[grey853]

Cute story. I loved how you worked in the Inuit story and how Frannie got it all wrong. Main thing is, Ray and Fraser finally get to the point of the whole thing. *g*

[mondschein1]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[love_jackianto]

Wonderful story. I like how you worked the Fox Story into it.

[mondschein1]

Thanks! It was more difficult than it should have been...that'll teach me to ignore my fandom for a year, I guess.

[mondschein1]

OH HEY. I just figured out the meaning of both your username and icon. *is proud, and has also watched ALL of Torchwood recently. Um.*

[love_jackianto]

Hey. I probably should have picked a username that was less fandom specific, but Torchwood was one of the first fandoms I was actively involved in (I met so many great people) and it has a special place in my heart.

'*is proud, and has also watched ALL of Torchwood recently. Um.*'
Cool. So what did you think of the show?

[tinzelda]

This was adorable! I really enjoyed it. I love when Fraser says "Oh dear" (I'm always a sucker for that) and I love Ray the spiky-haired knight in shining armor. I thought you did a great job in capturing all of the other characters too. Very nice!

[mondschein1]

Thankee! And glad you thought the voices worked!

(As a side note, if you don't mind me asking, what is the meaning of your user name?)

[tinzelda]

My username actually doesn't mean anything! I was playing with magnet letters with my son, making up silly words, and it just appeared. I was looking for a nonsense word for my LJ name at the time.

Thanks again for a great story! Back to the beach (I'm on vacation!)

[galenlisle]

I especially liked having the other characters a big part of the story; it was good to hear Dewey's voice (who'd have thought!) and the others, and to see them betting on a Fraser Inuit story, completely in character with the show. Thank you for a fun read!

[mondschein1]

Eee, thank you! Or you're welcome, or. Something. *fidgets awkwardly*

[mergatrude]

Whee! I love the craziness at the station as people try and interpret Fraser. Ray, you're really adorable with your doorstop confessions/invitations. And Fraser, excellent response!

&hearts &hearts &hearts

[mondschein1]

*pats Ray* He thinks he's a man of action, but really he's a man of indecisive impromptu hopping. Silly.

Glad you enjoyed!