LJ Idol Week 1 - Saying Goodbye

[monkeysugarmama]

When the phone rang, I was busy. Well, not really busy, I was just reading on the couch, but in my freshly-graduated mind, I was too busy to be disturbed. I’d just started a new job. After a day of straightening shelves and chasing kids around the children’s section of the library, all I wanted to do was relax with my book, drink a glass of cheap

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[kittenboo]

wow, just wow, intense story, but i have to tell you i am just in awe at your ability to pull me into every one of your stories

[monkeysugarmama]

Thank you so much, kittenboo! You know me, I gotta tell a tale!

[bewize]

This post has given me the shakes. I hope and pray that the ending that you didn't share is one of relief and happiness. I'm almost afraid to ask.

[monkeysugarmama]

It was, hours later we found her - I am going to insert a comment here further down that explains, but that was one of the most terrifying days of my life.

[quoting_mungo]

I would imagine so! I'm glad your mother got out of it alright.

-Alexandra

[lisasali]

Really stellar, suspenseful writing as always!

[rock_princess98]

YOUR WRITEING KICKS ASS!

[monkeysugarmama]

Thank you so much for reading!

[suesniffsglue]

oh my lord

this was absolutely amazing. i don't even want to read anything else right now, just digest this.

[monkeysugarmama]

I really appreciate it Miss Sue. I can't wait to read yours too!

[shay_writes]

Amazing. Intense. Truly stellar.

(was she o.k? please forgive for not knowing if you have posted about this before. My memory is crap)

*hugs*

I can only imagine the emotions that accompanied the compostion of this entry.

*more hugs*

[monkeysugarmama]

It was an awful day. September 11th may become just another day for people who weren't affected in any way, but last week, all morning I felt ill.