Comments | montellico: let out the beast

montellico

let out the beast

May 12, 2014 12:13

title: let out the beast
pairing(s): jongtae
rating: nc-17
wordcount: ~5700
summary: this (aka shapeshifting!shinee) continued….
a/n: part two, aka the part where they actually shack up. it's been a million years since the first part, i know.. sorry….

( At first the fear is that Jonghyun will change in the van or on an elevator or in public, but then promotions roll around and the fear is that he will change on stage, because literally nothing could be worse than a giant, stinky wolf bursting forth from the confines of his flashy stage outfit on live television. )

jongtae, shinee

Comments 13

meridianslair May 12 2014, 20:56:47 UTC

i really liked both parts omg kind of odd how everything happened tho but jongtae is cute *3*

montellico May 14 2014, 02:15:43 UTC

thank you for reading/commenting!! glad you enjoyed :)

diamondacequeen May 13 2014, 18:18:31 UTC

I think it's great that you took the time to finish this even though you said you lost interest. Jonghyun was such a snippy little thing before he finally told Taemin he loved him, and I enjoyed that probably a little too much. It was just funny to me. Like when they were picking who was going to mess up first. His comment had me cracking up. And then when Onkey were teasing him and he got all mad and talked about people all in his business, I couldn't control the laughter. I don't know why it was so funny seeing him all worked up and moody, but it worked for me. And I think that Jongtae really worked in this piece. Like, they were on the same page the whole time. I think you did really well with this. So thank you for posting it! :)

montellico October 2 2014, 05:06:52 UTC

REPLYING VERY LATE BUT thank you for reading and thank you for this extremely kind comment!! :)

(The comment has been removed)

montellico October 2 2014, 05:08:01 UTC

REPLYING LATE AS FUCK BUT i'm glad you clicked the link!! haha thank you for reading and leaving this v sweet comment! :)

linnhe May 27 2014, 07:31:58 UTC

his very best Obey-The-Maknae face
this made me laugh because i'd bet a precious thing shit's real

But it's okay; he doesn't need them. Banana milk understands him. Banana milk will never leave him.
this taemin is already so great

(He also eats the remaining chips for good measure; best to destroy all evidence, right?)
perfect self-serving munchkin ;-; it's amusing how little it all phases him

"I guess so," Jonghyun sighs. "I can't believe this happened. My beautiful face. The fans will be devastated."

"I'm gorgeous again!" he exclaims, rushing into the other bedroom and clutching his face happily.
hahaha all these characters are perfect. the way they treat every situation so flippantly and only think of themselves

"Nothing wrong with blond hair," Jonghyun says.

Minho shoots him a death glare.

"But I see your point."

"I think I'm gonna sleep in your guys' room tonight," Jonghyun says.
:')

Taemin rolls his eyes. "It's an escaped zoo tiger that somehow managed to get into our dorm."
taem sassing the shit out of everything ♥

( ... )

linnhe May 27 2014, 07:32:09 UTC

Jonghyun is probably an idiot, but this is a fucking epiphany to him. He has always wanted Taemin. Fragile, harebrained, invincible Taemin, who, by some miracle, wants him too. Neither of them have ever said it, and neither of them ever will unless something changes right now. No time like the present for making a complete ass of yourself, Jonghyun thinks.
the way jonghyun thinks of taemin is the prettiest thing about this chapter :)

"I - " Honestly, the thought never, ever occured to Jonghyun. Like, ever. "Sorry ( ... )

montellico October 2 2014, 05:11:53 UTC

I DON'T KNOW WHY I DIDN'T SEE THIS COMMENT UNTIL NOW BUT holy crap this is so overwhelmingly long and thoughtful and i never could have expected it i know i'm horribly late in replying but thank you so much!! dang! i'm glad you enjoyed ;;; rly...thank you..!

hipployta May 27 2014, 23:18:33 UTC

The Taemin and Jjong viewpoints are awesome

Taemin is so calm...maknae on top

Jjong constantly getting too afraid to say anything until Jinki says GO FOR IT

Why are you sulking Jjong when you were going to Kibum for advice

Taemin tried to take the first date to dating and Jjong just went all the way

montellico October 2 2014, 05:14:21 UTC

REPLYING TO THIS AWKWARDLY 5 MONTHS LATER, thank you for reading and commenting!! maknae on top, tbh i think that's a fair assessment of reality lol. anyway yeah thank you :)