Broken Open - Part 8/9

[montmorency]

Comments

[fara1903]

Finally, all the angst almost killed me. Am so glad they talked it out!

[montmorency]

Same here. I hope it wasn't TOO horrid. :0

[fara1903]

Of course not, bb! I enjoyed it. Curious to see how you're going to end this!

[montmorency]

:D You stuck with it this far, you must have enjoyed it a bit. I was teasing (a little). I worry that I overdo the angst. ♥

Noooooooo make up love making?

[jenny1671]

Awwwwwwwwww I wanted some hot steamy love making to happen and you ended it. Now I have to wait another 7days UGGG I am not sure I can wait that long, going through withdrawals and its not a pretty picture. LOL! Thanks for your story. I wish it went on forever. I could keep reading infinitely.

Re: Noooooooo make up love making?

[montmorency]

Heh. You've figured out my pattern, kind of. It takes a certain amount of time for the next bit to form. I'm not good at sex scenes, my forte is humor and maybe angst. Thanks!

Re: Noooooooo make up love making?

[jenny1671]

Well I enjoyed your lovemaking scenes more than your angst. I read them more than twice as I recall. I do prefer if they were face to face and gazing into each others eyes with a depth of feeling so incredible the written word will hardly do it justice, when they intensely express their affection for each other. :D

Re: Noooooooo make up love making?

[montmorency]

Good point - angst can be hard to read because it's so emotional and the emotions are alarming or unhappy. Yet I find that the angst makes the rest of it so much better. :) Seriously, I am in awe of other writers who are so much better than I am. I'm happy if I can make the reader laugh or feel an emotion just for a second.

[fritzie2a_t]

Not too horrid at all. Just hope they can come to terms on how it will be. Adam seriously needs to listen to Tommy,and stop being so cave mannish. And Tommy needs to start believing that he has something to offer Adam, other than sex.

Good chapter. Going to hate to see this finished !

[montmorency]

Well, it had to end sometime, right? Oh the frustration of the work in progress!

They'll come to terms. Life ain't perfect so there's no guarantees for the future, but the most important thing is to work on something together, with eyes and hearts open.

Thanks! <3

[i_glitterz]

oh my god...i love PISSED THE FUCK OFF Adam....this was sooooo crazy i really thought that Adam was going to hit Tommy...I am soo happy that you didn't let that happen....cant wait for the next chappie and i love this story bb...great job as always..

hugs and kisses,

Tori<333

[montmorency]

Adam kind of surprised me by saying that, you know? That is, yeah, I wrote it - but still, characters do have a way of taking over. He would never hit Tommy but I did rather love the time that the RL Adam went after that photographer and tackled him. That was satisfying. I can picture Adam with a temper once he's pushed too far.

Thanks!!

[i_glitterz]

Adam with a temper is sexy as hell...that's all I'm saying lol...I thought it was fucked up that the guy pressed charges...he was the one stalking Adam!!! But yeah...sometimes characters say things we weren't even thinking of while the story was in our heads...that's what makes everyone's story so unique...great job again bb...cant wait for the last chappie...cant believe it's almost over:(

[montmorency]

That photog was an asshat. I don't advise celebrities to harm paps, because there's a fine line, but Adam didn't hurt him, just tried to get the camera and I think the guy was very surprised to find big old Adam grabbing him.

Thanks again, that means so much to me. <3

[thrace_adams]

*flails and collapses from too much flailing* I'm rereading the previous chapter and this one and leaving more proper feedback when I can stop flailing.

Is it inappropriate to tell you I love you and I want to marry this fic???

[montmorency]

Yay! Thank you x 1 million. You have my permission for this fic's hand in marriage. :P

<3