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montmorency

Broken Open - Part 8/9

Mar 19, 2011 21:14

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moodwriter March 20 2011, 08:38:28 UTC

You know, this story is a rollercoaster ride. <3333 I don't even know what to say except that I'm enjoying it a lot, and it's very different. :D I'm also sad and happy that it will be ending soon. Sad because I don't want it to end, and happy because I want them to be happy. :)

Awwww... it's kind of beautiful and messy and sweet and lovely. Thank you for writing this. It's so precious to me. <3333

montmorency March 20 2011, 21:36:33 UTC

Indeed it is a rollercoaster ride, but I think they stepped off the ride at the end of this part. Now it's just a period of recovery where their stomachs will stop doing flip-flops and they can enjoy things a bit more. At least I hope that's what they have in mind!

♥

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montmorency March 20 2011, 21:37:40 UTC

Thank you so very much! It's a good thing Neil was there for comic relief. :D

adamshipper1985 March 20 2011, 13:48:01 UTC

O gosh!!! great chapter...during their confrontation i forgot breathing, i read so fast ;)
cant wait for the final thing!

montmorency March 20 2011, 21:52:42 UTC

Hey, thanks! Writing the scene made me tense, kind of. You know? Keep breathing....

maggy_97 March 20 2011, 15:09:34 UTC

Wow, Adam was really in a mood, wasn't he? I loved Tommy's inner monologue here, that lead to him saying "I'm sorry".

Can't wait to see how you will end this.

montmorency March 20 2011, 21:53:56 UTC

In a mood is one way to put it. :D

Tommy takes on too much of the blame. I think he does it to smooth things over and make people get along. He doesn't have a lot of (or even enough) ego.

Thanks!

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montmorency March 20 2011, 21:40:15 UTC

"Douchebag" is "lovely"? Hmmmm... rethinks the ending. Maybe Monty (I am being self-referential here, not talking about Monte) wasn't being clear... LOL. Kidding. Thanks!