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H50: The future's big surprise (is no surprise at all)

Dec 18, 2011 18:43

Title: The future's big surprise (is no surprise at all)
Fandom: H50
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen, h/c, family/friendship, angst
Characters: Danny, Kono, Chin, Steve, Lori, mentions of bad guys
Spoilers/warnings: Spoilers up through 2.05 (taggish to that ep, though there aren’t any overtly specific references to that plot here). Extremely vague references ( Read more... )

genre. h/c, fandom: h50, oneshot, genre. gen, genre. angst, genre. friendship

Comments 24

embroiderama December 19 2011, 02:38:30 UTC

This is beautiful. I love the whole scene with Danny, Kono and Chin at the end.

moogsthewriter December 19 2011, 23:28:23 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed. :)

kitmerlot1213 December 19 2011, 02:45:06 UTC

This was completely awesome!

I liked your descriptions of Danny's fear, panic and worry over the dreams of Kono's death and I have to tell you that when they are actually at the warehouse, I was leaning forward in the my seat, sick with dread but unable to stop reading.

Truly excellent work on this fic.

moogsthewriter December 19 2011, 23:28:55 UTC

Thanks so much! :) It's always nice to hear that I put people on edge; I'm twisted like that.

4thoffive December 19 2011, 03:58:41 UTC

Great job. Lots of tension and angst. Danny was so brave. This was a terrific story. Thank you for sharing.

moogsthewriter December 19 2011, 23:29:19 UTC

And thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

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moogsthewriter December 19 2011, 23:30:06 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. :) (Especially that last scene. It didn't want to come out right for the longest time.)

simplyn2deep December 19 2011, 05:31:15 UTC

great touching story.

family is family - whether you pick them or are born into them.

moogsthewriter December 19 2011, 23:30:23 UTC

So very, very true. :) Thanks for the review!