don't say goodbye, you are my everything to me

[moonkissedx]

life
junsu-centric & ot5, g, angst
1185 w.

i wrote this crying because of junsu's tweets, so a lot of emotion was probably carried into this. i hope you like because i haven't updated for a long time & i'd really love to hear your opinion on this since it's my first junsu-centric (or member-centric) fic. quotebacks would be lovely c: do tell me if

Comments

[kimsuie]

thanks so much for this beautiful piece, it is really hard to stay saint in this mad world aye. regrets, memories, the could-have-beens...

"He stretches his hand out, trying to grasp onto a wisp of cloud, trying to grasp onto something real for a long time in a while now but everything slips past his fingers like breeze and he feels helpless."> This really paints Junsu's mood well, I think. As much as I hope he is managing fine, his tweets tell me otherwise ):

We can only pray for all 5 of them to be strong, and move on (tgt hopefully), whatever the future holds...as long as each of them finds true happiness, that's what matters ain't it? ♥♥♥

[moonkissedx]

so sorry for replying to your comment so late bb, hope you can forgive me ;; thank you for reading & yes, all we can do is pray that they'll be happy and strong c:

[hyperaewoo]

<3333 too sad yet pretty.... I keep imagining Junsu and I cried on Yoochun's line to Junsu.
hope those promise are like what Junsu said, not tge fragile one.. ;;

[moonkissedx]

aww ;;;; no cry! /hands you kleenex (so sorry for the late reply bb) but asdkflj i'm glad you liked it? no worries, they boys'll keep their promises, won't they? c: thank you for reading & i'm really happy that you could imagine junsu in the fic! ♥

[whitemoonx3]

You know that I'm incapable of leaving long replies LOL so I just copied and pasted our twitter conver from earlier on.

"but bb, its a good piece. Junsu is like the most optimistic out of the 5 so I imagine its rare for him to show his emotions."

[whitemoonx3]

Just kidding.

I'm not so mean (although you're forever mean to me XD)

Okay, what do I like about this fic? Only a few sentences. HAHAHA kidding. 3/4 of it.

I like your reference that life was like chess and once a wrong move was made there's no turning back, and how well it fitted into their situation.

I like the way you potray his helpless emotions: "he stretches his hand out, trying to grasp onto a wisp of cloud, trying to grasp onto something real for a long time in a while now but everything slips past his fingers like breeze and he feels helpless." /ANGST FIC IS ANGST

AND YOU KNOW WHAT, MY FAVOURITE PART OUT OF THE WHOLE FIC IS THIS:

"(“dong bang shin ki, hwaiting. do you remember this, junsu-yah? how we’d always leave you out for fun?” jaejoong chokes on his words, “xiah junsu, fighting. you’ll be okay. hyung’s here.”)" bittersweet T T

I wished I knew how to do the bigass font thing to show that this is one of my favourite fics out of all of your works because im a part-time junsu bias

I DEMAND A YUNHO FIC NEXT.

[moonkissedx]

i'm not mean okay!!!!!1 hahaha i came up with the chess analogy at 5am /proud. and the helpless emotions bit... it's something like how i feel sometimes, so i tried to express it in the way that i feel it. that's my favourite part too hahahaha sobs ;; "hyung's here." lksdjf dead lmao. heheh thank you lor~ yunho fic ah. i'll see how. hehe.

WELCOME BACK

[whitemoonx3]

HELLO~!!!1!!!

/WAVES TO WORSE AUTHOR EVER THAT FORGETS TO REPLY HER COMMENTS

/TROLLS LIKE A TROLL TROLOLOLOL

[convolution]

/crying

This is so beautiful, it makes my heart hurt.
;___;
I will forever be waiting for that day.

[moonkissedx]

asldkfj no cry ;; it's not beautiful okay, sobs. and i'll be waiting with you~ ♥ thank you bb c: