Comments | moonsheen: [fic][baccano!] Firo Falls Off A Building

moonsheen

[fic][baccano!] Firo Falls Off A Building

Jul 20, 2010 21:48

More Baccano!, pre-series. 966 words.

( Firo, Age 11, Seeks To Better Himself, Falls Off A Building, Meets Interesting People. )

r-rail tracer?!, fic, baccano!

Comments 13

yuanfang July 21 2010, 02:11:55 UTC

That was so great! I think you captured their voices really well. "“That pair? Don’t bother. They’re filth. You want style, my family’s got a place downtown that’ll fix you up with something real swell.”" was probably one of my favorite linesss

Thanks for writing it!

vulchu July 21 2010, 02:12:56 UTC

POOR FIRO'S HAT. And I just love the line “Don’t tell nobody you saw me and let the cops handle the... shoes, and we’ll call it even.” IT'S JUST. CLAIRE. TINY CLAIRE WHAT DID YOU DO.

But still SO MAGICAL they are both such adorable boys. Heeee. :D

ruffwriter July 21 2010, 02:31:52 UTC

ashfjsk THIS IS THE CUTEST THING THERE EVER WAS.

puella_nerdii July 21 2010, 03:14:41 UTC

Oh god young!Claire is just -- I can't even handle him. He's already figuring out he's God, isn't he.

“That’s fine. Come with me anyway. That we’ll say you owe me, me saving your life and all. That life’s mine now. You’re safe as long as you’re with me.”

klkasdljfLOVE

haeralis July 21 2010, 03:35:10 UTC

OH MY GOSH IT'S PERFECT ♥