H50 fic - part 2

[moonstootired]

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[jazzybabe56]

poor Steve - poor Danny -- these two need to catch a break very soon!

loving this tale to death!! <3

[americandirrty]

I love this story so much!!

[kitmerlot1213]

This was so tragically passionate!

Steve's has completely lost his perspective when it comes to Danny--he knows it and he can't stop himself.

And Danny's so furious and hurt at Steve that he can't even articulate it--which goes against everything Danny represents.

I do worry that forcing Danny back into Five-0 might not be the best move but Steve is a desperate man and I think he thinks if he forces Danny to deal with him, Danny will finally talk to him again.

Continued great work on this fic :)

[magicgerbil]

Omg I love this so much! *snugglesfic* What a great way to treat a hang over. :D

[swas]

wah :_(
You've done a really great job, this is so awesome. It's great to finally find a 5-0 fic longer than 500 words, and you take the time to build up and describe details. Great work!!

[swas]

It shows how much I like this as I managed to be so inarticulate to just repeat "great" 3 times in 2 sentences ;)

[moonstootired]

Well, inarticulation is a friend of mine. So I would just like to tell you: your comment is great, great, great!!!

Tanks so much! :)