Comments | moonstootired: H50 fic

moonstootired

H50 fic

Mar 04, 2011 18:39

( Take PWP, episode coda and h/c; mix and shake; get this! )

Comments 28

azziria March 4 2011, 18:15:38 UTC

Nope, doesn't suck :)

Just what I needed to come home to - sexy and sweet and yet not schmoopy. I like the way you changed POV, too. Lovely.

moonstootired March 4 2011, 18:51:48 UTC

Well, that is good to know. :D
Thank you.

jendavis March 4 2011, 19:10:41 UTC

This is exactly what I needed to read, after the insanity that's been this week. Just lovely. :)

carpediem_14 March 4 2011, 19:12:54 UTC

That was great! I loved it! You should definitely write more!

bhayling March 4 2011, 19:12:56 UTC

This is a scene I've been waiting for as well -- if there was ever a perfect moment for Danny to drag Steve away and tend to him, them love the stuffing out of him, the end of 1.09 was it ( ... )

moonstootired March 4 2011, 23:39:12 UTC

First of thank you so much for this lovely reply!

But also I'm a big ol' sap, too! Because THIS

I loves me some Steve and Danno winding up where, if TV networks had any balls, they should wind up, 'cos God knows, these two characters? The very DEFINITION of in love and ridiculously married.

my sentiments exactly!

kitmerlot1213 March 4 2011, 19:20:11 UTC

This was just lovely!

I liked that Danny tried to pull back from Steve because he was afraid that he was taking advantage of his partner's vulnerability.

That is an extremely Danny-esque way of thinking, and good for Steve for quickly waylaying his fears.

I also liked that you had humor mixed in with your gorgeously passionate moments--great work on this :)