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speakingwosound June 24 2011, 03:26:31 UTC
Ahh, I love all the emotion in this. Poor Adam :( Blake had better come to his rescue, and come to this own senses and give Adam what they both need!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Poor Addy moonwarrior578 June 24 2011, 12:57:29 UTC
Well Blake will get his ass in gear...soon hopefully!

Thank you for commenting!

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Thanks moonwarrior578 June 24 2011, 12:58:24 UTC
I love that part too, I find it hilarious...well I did write it, but I love it.

THank you for commenting!

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So great! anonymous June 24 2011, 16:09:41 UTC
Hey, it's shevinelove from blogspot! Looooove this chapter. Suspenseful at the end :) Haha. Can't wait to see what happens next. Just wanted to let you know that Chapter One is up, as well!

http://shevinelove.blogspot.com/2011/06/chapter-one-close-your-eyes-open-your.html

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Re: So great! moonwarrior578 June 24 2011, 22:07:59 UTC
I'm so glad you love it!!

I read your chapter and it rocks, but you can probably tell from the comment I left!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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batrox June 24 2011, 19:52:46 UTC
At the beginning I was sitting in front of my computer and had to bite down on my lip to keep me from laughing out maniacly!!! XD

Then the story carries on and I'm shocked because of the man, who is waiting for Adam to harm him and my only hope is that Blake cares enough about Adam to come looking for him!

Really, you're killing me over here. ><
Can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)

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Thank you so much! moonwarrior578 June 24 2011, 22:09:38 UTC
I didn't think it was that funny! I guess it is though...

Of course Blake will come after Adam!

I'll start working on the chapter right away, or I might just torture you some more...

*evil laugh*

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untouched_angel June 29 2011, 04:25:31 UTC
Ahhh! this is ooo suspenseful! You just reminded me why I dont like reading stories when there not finished! Because of the Suspence! lol. Well this chapter is ooo awesome and you should totally update it before i hunt you down and demand you write more or go insane..... just kidding... i think lol

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Well I didn't mean too.... moonwarrior578 June 29 2011, 18:12:42 UTC
But the suspense wants to make you read moreeee!!

Yeah, well I hate when other authors put suspense, but it has me on edge until the next chapter. I'd thought I do the same!

I'm working on the next chapter, I'm glad you like it and thanks for commenting.

And btw: YOU'LL NEVER FIND ME!

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Re: Well I didn't mean too.... untouched_angel June 29 2011, 19:30:07 UTC
MY FAMILY IS FULL OF POLICE ALL OVER!!! of course I'll find you silly ;P lol. I stalk your journal to see if you updated! I feel like a creeper now O.o lol

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Re: Well I didn't mean too.... moonwarrior578 June 29 2011, 19:35:37 UTC
Well I'm working on it now, so hopefully you won't have to stalk me too long.

Blake's being a little difficult, stupid sexy giant.

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